CHAPTER TWENTY ONE: FRIENDS

IT ALL STARTED WITH A BIG BANG

(From Jiyong's view)

How can I tell her, how can I tell her that I don't love her anymore if she loves me so much. I've already made such a commitment to her. How can I tell her that I'm in love with her best friend Lizzie?

I heard a ringing noise. That must be her. I have to tell her now, otherwise it will all go to far but then I'll hurt her, I can't hurt her like that, what do I do? How can I have only realised now that I don't love her.

"Hello," I said as she entered the house, "Ah, what's wrong?"
 

Her face was all red and swollen, she had obviously been crying.

"YOU KNOW WHAT'S WRONG, SEUNGHYUN IS AN AMAZING FRIEND TO YOU THAT'S WHAT'S WRONG," she said running up the stairs.

Lizzie came into the hallway, she looked so beautiful as always.

"Jiyong, what's wrong?" she said.

"Oh, I don't know. She's upset for some reason."

"She's probably just a little upset that's all," she smiled, "Jiyong, you know you're great company. You're really great to spend time with, you know."

I love spending time with you. How can I have only realised now. I didn't enjoy myself coming over here because she was here but because beautiful, charming Lizzie was here.

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topoppa
#1
Haha, maybe but I really wouldn't have a clue what to write :)
You143
#2
I'm going crazy while im reading this HAHA XD Can you make a sequel please ? :)
BigBang_VIP #3
GAHHH I loved this story <3 (Tabisaur from Tumblr here!)
DragonG
#4
oh my ga i just started reading this story! >.< oh well, i love it so far, and i'm sure it's gonna be awesome reading the ending! but i don't want it to be over lmao
topoppa
#5
mmm I know I rushed it :) But to be honest I was running out of ideas of what to write so I just ended it. Originally it was going to be fifty chapters 0__0 :) thanks for reading :)
SenyaG #6
the ending was rushed but still I liked it ♥
wtfelicia #7
okay I dint expect this to end already. I was just reading chap 19 or 20 like moments before and now it has ended!! but ahh, it's good! hahah! so jiyong is in love with her best friend. imagine his face when she smiled like mad instead of getting angry. and ahh, what a shock to find seunghyun on the floor with pills and all. he just slipped and passed out then he expects himself to die already!? crazy boy but so cute. I like this story! really good! although it may have been better if it's longer >.< but ahh.. thank you for writing yea! ^^
topoppa
#8
umm thank you :) It's nice to hear someone liked it :) If you read the full story, tell me what you think :)
rickyljoechunji
#9
so i read the intro and boy was i leaning closer and closer to my laptop screen.<br />
didn't realize that until i finished reading the intro.<br />
it's really good.
wtfelicia #10
be a good man and pain for life!!