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Detective L and the Secret Behind the Diary
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L opened the door of his apartment, being greeted by an overenthusiastic Suzy.

“Welcome home, master," Suzy exclaimed watching L kick his shoes off. Rushing over, she quickly straightened them out, giving an accomplished grin to the young man.

“Don't call me master," L scolded, walking towards the kitchen.

“Yes, boss," Suzy answered, giggling slightly. She followed L to the kitchen, noticeably brightening when she saw L's surprised face. Food was already made and set up, making L's stomach rumble with anticipation.

“Did you make this?” L asked pointing to the food. Suzy nodded energetically, skipping to the table to pull a chair out for L.

“How?” L asked, suspicion laced within his voice, slowly taking the offered seat.

“I don't know. I just saw some food in the refrigerator and before I knew it, I had all of this cooked,” Suzy answered.

L sighed, accepting the glass of water that Suzy graciously poured out for him. Gulping it down, he felt a few drops escape his mouth. After wiping it off with the back of his hand, he focused his attention back to the food in front of him.

“What happened today?" Suzy interrupted, looking L up and down. "Why are you wearing a suit today?”

Looking at the innocent girl in front of him, he reluctantly breathed out, "Somebody left."

“Left? Where'd they go?" Suzy naively questioned.

L stopped eating and put his utensils down. Knowing the curiosity was killing the girl, he replied, "To a far away place."

L didn't let his true feelings show. He didn't want to start crying so he pulled out a chair for Suzy to sit in. “Stop talking and just eat.”

Suzy looked down at her bowl and gave a quick glance to L.

Smiling, she answered, "Okay, boss."

 

 

L was about to clear up the dishes, but Suzy didn't give him a chance.

“I'll do it, boss,” she insisted, taking the bowl from L's hand.

“Whatever,” L muttered, taking his bag and walking to the living room.

Taking the diary out of his bag, he stared at it blankly.

'He already killed my mom for no reason. Why would he kill my dad too? Is it for revenge? But if he wants revenge, why would he kill my dad and not me?'

Suddenly, the doorbell chimed, breaking L away from his thoughts. Walking towards the door, he cautiously asked, "Who's there?"

“Delivery for Mr. L,” a boy responded from the other side.

L opened the door and was immediately handed a small package.

“Sign here, please," the boy requested, holding out a clipboard.

Once L signed, he shut the door, not bothering to thank the young man. Walking to the living room couch, he sat down and tore the package open. There was nothing but a single card in it.

“Game start?” L whispered to himself. And right at that moment, his phone went off. Getting a call from an unknown number, L hesitated slightly before answering.

“Hello?”

“L-shi. Do you remember me?” a deep voice asked.

“Who are you?” L asked, feeling chills run down his spine from the ice cold voice.

“You don't remember me? That's upsetting,” the man responded, faking a hurt voice.

“Is this.. Thunder?”

“Ding ding ding, you're a winner! Your prize is on the back of that card you're holding. I do hope you'll have fun during this little activity I've set up for you. Game start," he finished, ending the call.

"Hello? Hello!" L basically yelled to himself. Throwing his phone on the floor out of frustration, he looked at the card in his hands. Turning it around, his irritation hit it's peak as it was completely blank.

"There's nothing on it," L murmured to himself, balling his hands into fists.

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Panda_coco
#1
Chapter 13: Bizzy? It's suppose to be 'busy' right?
adiezty #2
Chapter 35: aahh... it's bae jangmi?..
thanks for the story :) i really like it..
adiezty #3
Chapter 29: i think the big boss is kim kibum right?
Icey09 #4
Idk if it's just me but I can't read it the format is weird on my ipad I have to scroll to the side to finish reading the sentence
sazkianadhira #5
Chapter 2: Interesting! Please edit it abit faster cause im gonna read this story so dammuch. Thank you authornim! X'D
shirubamuun
#6
Chapter 37: You are right. Thats low.
Mikka_
#7
Chapter 35: *he will play something like that, and for Jiyeon too.
I have a lot of thing to tell you about your story but I don't know how to explain myself!
I'll read the side story now.
Thank you again for this beautiful story! I'll wait for your next story.
O(≧▽≦)O
Mikka_
#8
Chapter 35: Wow, that was really good! I hadn't been this addict for a story since a long time!
A really like how you expose every cases . It makes my brain work A LOT haha. I think this story is a bit crazy -in the good way- And seriously I'm impress by your imagination! It must be difficult to write this kind of story, you have to think of all the details ... .
Now that I finish this story, idk if I'm still confused about some details, I mean Kim Bum was something like a double spy ?
In fact I think I understand everything but I'm not sure of what I understand and if I really understand the real thing -sorry my mind is confused xD-
If I just can give you a little advice, you should change you presentation of characters. For people who just begin now, it give us too much hint! I wasn't surprise when I learn for Kim bum because just by your presentation I know he will olay
lemonlimesoda
#9
I'm so excited to start reading this, there's so background info, like a real drama. ^.^
Mikka_
#10
Chapter 2: Hey! I didn't read your story yet... but I really want to!
But because you editing it I didn't start yet ...
Should I wait for you to finish all the editing part(if it's that how long do you think it may take?) or start now ?