Choi Siwon?

Detective L and the Secret Behind the Diary
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L's phone began to ring.

“Hello?” he answered when he picked up, his voice echoing out from the speakers.

J gave him a subtle, ‘watch what you say to him,’ face.

“L-shi, where is your father?” the voice asked.

"Are you Choi Siwon?" L demanded, but the voice just answered with a laugh.

"Do you want to know how your father was killed?” the voice spoke up.

L and J looked to each other with hard gazes.

"Are you the one who killed him?" L asked, earning a laugh from the caller.

"Because your dad isn't here anymore, I will take my revenge on you. Listen carefully because I will only say it one time. I have placed a bomb in this building and it will blow this place up at 12 o'clock tonight." 

Everyone in the building panicked, screaming and running towards the exit. However, since the company worked through machines, the doors were all locked.

"What do you want?” J yelled after he took the phone from L’s hand.

"Give me L?" the voice asked, causing L to grab the phone back from his brother.

"What do you want?" L asked angrily.

"If you can find found out my real identity and find the bomb, I will stop the bomb and go with you.”

"And if we don't?" L asked, trying to keep his voice as steady as possible.

"Then it’s game over,” the voice finished, hanging up.

J looked to his watch and saw that they only had 6 hours until midnight.

"What now?" the older asked asked L.

L closed his eyes while the rest of the building was still a big mess. After a few seconds he opened his eyes and looked to his phone. He dialed someone's number and began to call.

"Who are you calling?" J asked, giving his brother a confused glance.

“Hello? Suzy, are you outside right now?" L asked, making J look up in surprise.

"Yes, boss. I was just on time,” Suzy answered while standing outside of the building with Yoona.

"Good,” L said, smirking slightly.

"When did you...?" J asked, but L ignored him

"I want you girls to go to the Choi Siwon’s former house. Take a taxi. I’ll send you a message with the address. Be careful,” L wa

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Panda_coco
#1
Chapter 13: Bizzy? It's suppose to be 'busy' right?
adiezty #2
Chapter 35: aahh... it's bae jangmi?..
thanks for the story :) i really like it..
adiezty #3
Chapter 29: i think the big boss is kim kibum right?
Icey09 #4
Idk if it's just me but I can't read it the format is weird on my ipad I have to scroll to the side to finish reading the sentence
sazkianadhira #5
Chapter 2: Interesting! Please edit it abit faster cause im gonna read this story so dammuch. Thank you authornim! X'D
shirubamuun
#6
Chapter 37: You are right. Thats low.
Mikka_
#7
Chapter 35: *he will play something like that, and for Jiyeon too.
I have a lot of thing to tell you about your story but I don't know how to explain myself!
I'll read the side story now.
Thank you again for this beautiful story! I'll wait for your next story.
O(≧▽≦)O
Mikka_
#8
Chapter 35: Wow, that was really good! I hadn't been this addict for a story since a long time!
A really like how you expose every cases . It makes my brain work A LOT haha. I think this story is a bit crazy -in the good way- And seriously I'm impress by your imagination! It must be difficult to write this kind of story, you have to think of all the details ... .
Now that I finish this story, idk if I'm still confused about some details, I mean Kim Bum was something like a double spy ?
In fact I think I understand everything but I'm not sure of what I understand and if I really understand the real thing -sorry my mind is confused xD-
If I just can give you a little advice, you should change you presentation of characters. For people who just begin now, it give us too much hint! I wasn't surprise when I learn for Kim bum because just by your presentation I know he will olay
lemonlimesoda
#9
I'm so excited to start reading this, there's so background info, like a real drama. ^.^
Mikka_
#10
Chapter 2: Hey! I didn't read your story yet... but I really want to!
But because you editing it I didn't start yet ...
Should I wait for you to finish all the editing part(if it's that how long do you think it may take?) or start now ?