Review
Infinite's Blood Related Love ♡Annyeong my readers ~!! ^^
Sorry it's not an update ~
I'm in the middle of exam now ~
Hehehe~
I'll make the update as soon as I'm done with exam ~ Promise!!! ^^
Anyway ~
I'm here to tell you that......
I decided to make some changes in this story ~
Yup!! I give name to "you" ~
Let's welcome..... Lee Joo Young!!! xD
And.. ummm... I made a new poster for this fic ~
I hope it's not disappointing ~ ><
Or.. Maybe one of you wants to make it for me?
LoL
I will accept it anyway ~ Hehehe~
And... Back to the real intention ~
I'm here to share with you too about my story review made by doublef21
Here it is!!! xD
Title: [4/5]
Infinite's Blood Related Love? Who is related to who? Makes the readers curious and want to read more! ^^ Good job with the title :D
Foreword & Description: [7/10]
Description is kinda good :) But the foreword :( You must not use colourful fonts. They're bad for the readers' eyes. If you want to use them, you must change the fonts' background to black. It will be better :D
Appearance: [3/5]
I am not satisfied with the poster. Can you make it more, cute? I am truly sorry if this offended you. Mianhamnida *bowsbows* But, I like your background :D It's cute!
Plot: [14/15]
Your plot is interesting. She met a guy that will change her whole life! It's so catchy and attracting XD *Double thumbs up* Good job with the plot :)
Originality: [14/15]
Thumbs up for the originality :D I don't know what to say about this. *thumbs up*
Grammar & Punctuations: [16/20]
[1] But now, you've got another chance to attend school again. [chp 1]
[2] After finishing your shower. [chp 1]
[3] You look around to find an empty seat. [chp 5]
Better use going to instead of gotta :)
Characterization: [7/10]
You didn't describe the characters in the foreword. The readers will be curious about the characters. So, better describe the characters' pesonalities in the foreword :)
Story Flow: [9/10]
Your story flow is interesting :) *Thumbs up* I really enjoy it :D
Overall Enjoyment: [8/10]
Ahh XD I enjoy reading your story :D First, I detected Myungyeol couple. Then, YADONG.. Hahaha. It's so *idk what to say* XD Please continue your story :DD
Bonus: [4/5]
4 out of 5 :) You deserve it :D
Total: 86/105
Not bad, hmm?
LoL
And I've made some improvements in my story ~
Hehehe~
Okay.. I gotta go!!
Need to prepare for my exam tomorrow ~
Bye guys!!! *throw hearts*
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