Review

Infinite's Blood Related Love ♡

Annyeong my readers ~!! ^^

Sorry it's not an update ~ 

I'm in the middle of exam now ~ 

Hehehe~
I'll make the update as soon as I'm done with exam ~ Promise!!! ^^

 

Anyway ~ 

I'm here to tell you that......

I decided to make some changes in this story ~ 

Yup!! I give name to "you" ~ 

Let's welcome..... Lee Joo Young!!! xD

 

 

And.. ummm... I made a new poster for this fic ~ 

I hope it's not disappointing ~ ><

Or.. Maybe one of you wants to make it for me?

LoL

I will accept it anyway ~ Hehehe~

 

And... Back to the real intention ~ 

I'm here to share with you too about my story review made by  doublef21

Here it is!!! xD

 

Title: [4/5]

Infinite's Blood Related Love? Who is related to who? Makes the readers curious and want to read more! ^^ Good job with the title :D

Foreword & Description: [7/10]
Description is kinda good :) But the foreword :( You must not use colourful fonts. They're bad for the readers' eyes. If you want to use them, you must change the fonts' background to black. It will be better :D

Appearance: [3/5]
I am not satisfied with the poster. Can you make it more, cute? I am truly sorry if this offended you. Mianhamnida *bowsbows* But, I like your background :D It's cute!

Plot: [14/15]
Your plot is interesting. She met a guy that will change her whole life! It's so catchy and attracting XD *Double thumbs up* Good job with the plot :)

Originality: [14/15]
Thumbs up for the originality :D I don't know what to say about this. *thumbs up*

Grammar & Punctuations: [16/20]
[1] But now, you've got another chance to attend school again. [chp 1]
[2] After finishing your shower. [chp 1]
[3] You look around to find an empty seat. [chp 5]
Better use going to instead of gotta :)

Characterization: [7/10]
You didn't describe the characters in the foreword. The readers will be curious about the characters. So, better describe the characters' pesonalities in the foreword :)

Story Flow: [9/10]
Your story flow is interesting :) *Thumbs up* I really enjoy it :D

Overall Enjoyment: [8/10]
Ahh XD I enjoy reading your story :D First, I detected Myungyeol couple. Then, YADONG.. Hahaha. It's so *idk what to say* XD Please continue your story :DD

Bonus: [4/5]
4 out of 5 :) You deserve it :D

Total: 86/105

 

Not bad, hmm? 

LoL 

And I've made some improvements in my story ~ 

Hehehe~

 

Okay.. I gotta go!!

Need to prepare for my exam tomorrow ~

Bye guys!!! *throw hearts*

 

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Comments

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nerdyviv #1
Chapter 43: dawwwwww the ending is so cuteee :DD
she_ab_taeteuk5
#2
I like it!!!Good job!
Panda_Derp
#3
Chapter 44: Kyaa~
This is really cute~!!!
Gewd Job!
Kekekekkekeke~
pancake_lover #4
Chapter 43: Just done reading it today ~
So sweetttt! ~ <3 Glad that it is a happy ending! Aww... L.Joe is sooo kiinnddd ;A; /sobs/

Anyway, this is one great ff I read.. Thanks 4 making dis fic author nim! ~ ^^
WookLover98
#5
Chapter 43: Hahaha cute plot and story
WookLover98
#6
Chapter 43: Hahaha cute plot and story
FyB2UTYSONELF93 #7
Chapter 43: nice story. though i got sad cause ljoe didnt end up w joo young. LOL! :D
i enjoyed reading it. thank you ^^
yujee146
#8
whaa~ She chose Myungsoo *u* love it!
Though ... the thingy kinda feels weird for me (maybe because I'm not used to this thing OTL )
But overall ... love the story ^_^