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— AUGUST 2015 subject

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777

han chiwon
south korea's first hero and former team member of mighty, chiwon is a divorced father of two who is struggling to balance his hero duties and his family life.

wonho (soloist)

earth manipulation 

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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— august 2018 subjects

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name redacted
the first person to break the contract, she's south korea's first villain. SHE VOWS TO TAKE IN ANY FUGITIVES OF THE LAW AND OVERTHROW THE GOVERNMENT.

LEE SUNGKYUNG (ACTRESS)

POWER MANIPULATION 

VILLAIN

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alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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JANUS OUROBOROS

yun jongsu
former team member of mighty, he broke the contract after his best friend, phantasm, died. he'd gone into hiding with former hero, lucky, until recently.

key (shinee)

dimensional manipulation

VILLAIN

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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oh junho
FORMER TEAM MEMBER OF MIGHTY, he broke the contract after his best friend, phantasm, died. he'd gone into hiding with former hero, janus, until recently.

taemin (shinee)

probability manipulation

villain

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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LEE SIAN
current team member of mighty, she is considered the nation's fairy. she is a strong hero, but she shows signs of struggle with alcohol. should be checked on.

iu (soloist)

psychic energy manipulation

HERO

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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AHN KEEHO
current team member of mighty and hero trainer, he's a super hero play boy with a lot of power and a lack of self-control.

yuta (nct)

astrology

HERO

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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mo bokyung
former team member of mighty. may possibly be alive as a villain under the name, mori. may possibly be aligned with the ringmaster.

seulgi (red velvet)

health manipulation

HERO

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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SHIN JIHYE
CURRENT MEMBER OF MIGHTY and hero trainer, she was once close to the ringmaster during training. she lost her brother to the first tonic in 2015.

ALEXA (SOLOIST)

electricity manipulation

HERO

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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eun hayeon
despite shortcomings during her training, she has proven herself worthy of being a hero. she is also currently a hero trainer.

liz (IVE)

cloning

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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kyung woojin
the second person to break the contract, he is technically a villain. however, he's one of the richest men in south korea, so he isn't a criminal.

eunwoo (astro)

ice manipulation

villain

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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BOO

boo yumi
dismissed from her contract personally by 777, her power is quite a difficult one. however, she may be deemed helpful in the future.

yeri (red velvet)

astral manipulation

MINIMAL

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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healing dove BLOODY DOVE

choi hana
former team member of mighty, her reputation was ruined after causing the death of multiple civilians and a government official. she must be apprehended, at all costs.

moka (i'll-it)

energy manipulation

villain

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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— December 2018 subjects

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seon yooshik
named south korea's best hero and former team member of mighty, he is one of the most powerful supers. he has no interest in anything other than saving people every day.

taecyeon (2pm)

raw power 

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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heo nari
after the murder of one of the might's doctors, she was branded a villain. she's a member of the ring.

hani (exid)

memory manipulation

psyche control

villain

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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nam geunyoung
current team member of mighty and hero trainer, she is a highly powerful hero that listens well. she does struggle with her limitations, which causes her to blackout often.

joy (red velvet)

concept manipulation

HERO

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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lee daewon
former team member of mighty, he was meant to replace vita after her disappearance. but he still works for the might as a healer.

wonwoo (seventeen)

biological manipulation

ill

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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shin minhyun
with his sister being dismissed as a minimal and after being recruited, he broke the contract. member of the ring.

kai (EXO)

vocal mind control

villain

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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lee dohun
being labeled a minimal the first time, he joined the might again in april 2019 and became very powerful. he almost burned down the training center.

hyunjin (stray kids)

demonic psionics

VILLAIN

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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shin hyeji
former team member of mighty, she is currently undergoing testing with the doctors and scientists of the might. displaying high levels of power.

kim minju (actress)

psionics

HERO

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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seo minji
she lost her mother to the first tonic in 2015. she never finished her training after the fire demon caused, and she's a member of the ring.

jiu (dreamcatcher)

emotion manipulation 

villain

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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im jihan
still working out the kinks in his power, specifically his drawing abilities, which his powers rely on. a lot of potential.

donghan (soloist)

monster creation

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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song beomsoo
current team member of mighty and a hero trainer, he ultimately lost his ability to speak without it causing him pain. however, his abilities can cause a lot of damage.

jeno (nct)

sound manipulation

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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song jinho
formerly used as a spy for the government, he learned something he wasn't supposed to. he may now be a member of the ring.

n (vixx)

mind reading 

villain

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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son haneul
current team member of mighty and hero trainer, he is a strong hero that has a strong sense of duty and responsibilities.

mingyu (seventeen)

air manipulation

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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cheon yeona
current hero trainer, she is very good at solo missions. she's a candidate for a potential team member of mighty.

soojin (soloist)

darkness manipulation

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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lee aeri
a candidate for potential team member of mighty, she stood out in her round of subjects with her unique power. she is popular and could possibly work well in group missions

sakura (le sserafim)

temporal reload 

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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jang hanbyul
she has a good power, but her main focus is on acting. scientists working on a solution to constant shedding of clothing.

sieun (stayc)

shapeshifting

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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kim haengbok
she doesn't have the strongest power, she is very useful during combat and works well during missions. currently assisting other heroes.

jiheon (fromis_9)

unbreakable skin

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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kang bomi
her training time was cut short due to strong potential shown. currently assisting other heroes.

isa (stayc)

enhanced durability

faster healing 

hero

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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joo beom
his training time was cut short after being dismissed as a minimal. this has taken a toll on his mental health.

daigo (to1)

plant creation

minimal

status

 

alive

 

deceased

Power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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bang seungmin
his training time was cut short after being recruited into the ring. he is now a member of the ring, but he seems harmless so far.

jooyeon (xdinary heroes)

gravity manipulation

villain

status

 

alive

 

deceased

power

speed

technique

intelligence

cooperativeness

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spaceprincess
#1
Chapter 14: You’re so proficient at describing fight scenes I can really picture the combat between Nightmare and Voltage.
I’m not sure if Voltage is truthful or trying to gaslight the other hero, though. In any case, Nightmare’s silence to Faye’s question makes it seem like she believes her.
The ‘Simon Says’ ability seems super cool, and it’s so useful, this way the villains have time to pick up their things in relative peace. It could also be a good way to end a fight without bloodshed.
That guitar riff opening is a good choice to musically underlie the fight scene.

So Heros that switch sides are taken to a glass prison… sounds a little dystopian for the good guys.
I feel bad for Aisa, it seems like he really needs a break. And somehow, the Ringmaster seems pretty humane and accepting of his choices for a villain, I’m not sure if the two individuals appearing at the end are like this as well…
torrents
#2
Chapter 14: how voltage got herself away with that nonsense is beyond me because if i had been nightmare or any other member of the might, i would've not let her get away with that. i wouldn't be surprised if members start surveilling her even more closely, and the next time she gets caught (if she gets caught), she may really be done in for.

honestly, the ringmaster's plan of temporarily retreating and hiding seems like the best strategy to make after such recent events. la voix's reluctance to leave korea because of his sister is so cute! boo seems like such an interesting character, especially her powers. i wonder if mori would be coming along to japan or not with the ring considering the fact she technically isn't on the ring's 'side'. when aisa ended up getting ambushed, i had to look back to the subjects page 'cause i was curious as to who the two figures were and whether they had any former relationship with aisa but then stopped myself because i'd rather have some things kept as a surprise and such. can't wait until the next chapter! i wonder what it will be focusing on, and once again, happy new year!
LilySaturn
#3
Chapter 14: Wow actually putting out regular chapters? I could never :’)

Always a treat to read! I’m shocked Voltage was able to talk herself out of that, I wonder how long she’ll be able to keep the spying up for. I really wish I had something more interesting to say, dcneuidix. But I’m really enjoying it ^^
BanaWarrior
#4
Chapter 14: DUDE! Voltage holy crap don't give me a heart attack!!! Even if she somehow scapes the consequences of what she did, she will need to be much MUCH more careful now, since eyes will be on her.

Ooh Nova somehow using air powers because Gemini is an air sign xD That's clever and creative! For a milisecond there I thought that Supernova had just exausted himself and the hand was a friend trying to stop him from falling but alas, it was exactly the opposite! I had a huge mental "OH " when the Ringmaster and Ogong started to fight and a "oh daaamn" when I read "simon says" and even the heroes who were far away heard it!!!!
Is Reverb suspicious? I guess Faye is just tired and she doesn't want to care anymore n.n'

When put that way, it was really a very crazy week for Aisa! Also, I love the idea of the Ring going to ask for help to Boo, but HOW they will move everyone to JAPAN??? Sooooo La Voix's weak spot is this sister of his. I do hope the Might doesn't get to know that :p Also, Gravi and Aisa are giving me young puppy befriends older cat vibes xD hahahaha

DUUUUDEEEEEEEEEEE!!! THOSE TWO!!! This aparition gave me lowkey chills! (relentessly screaming??? what's going on in Demon's mind??? Tho i'm zero surprised that Checkered has sinister thoughts lol) I just love the vibes that those two give. They are terrifying and very attractive and probably insane in different ways. To me, the reader, I'm loving it, but poor Aisa is the one alone with those mad lads, and I have a feeling they will somehow try to recruit/intimidate/threaten/blackmail him into joining their side and- R.I.P's Aisa sanity if they do.

The cliffhanger thooooooooooo ;w;

Happy Holidays/New Year!
BanaWarrior
#5
Chapter 13: It's fun to see how the heroes have to balance doing their job and being public figures. Some, like Supernova, seem to thrive in it xD It's always fun to see Voltage and Nova banther. Reberb also seems to be a really nice guy that gets along with everyone. And star reading is something so crazy that it sounds almost like magic, more than some other superpowers xD

Ogong clearly is a favorite of the goverment because of his high colaborativity. Using his powers in public would probably cause expulsion or harsher punishment it it was someone else, but I guess that Golden Boy Ogong can be left alone with just a short suspensio xD And duuuude! He's now officially the eyes and ears of the higher ups amidst the heroes! And of course he would love that lol

Dude, Reverb can find someone just by looking for the sound of their voice????!! Considering the nature of sound waves, it means it must be pretty hard to hide from him! Also, it really looks like Reverb and Faye have history. Not romantic, necessarily, but they fore sure seems to have known each other for a long time.

AAAHHHH OMG is Voltage turning coats NOW?! I imagined it would a bit less on the nose, but I guess that with this attack against the camp being pretty much inexcapable, she doesn't have many options. Tho it's a pitty that she was with Nightmare. They seemed to somewhat get along. :')

But I guess it will be funny to see Ogong's reaction that a betrayal happened right under his watch. xD
Vaniyya
#6
Chapter 13: First chapter!! You are a hero for getting this out so quickly! A legend! The fact that their two strongest heros and probably most trained are on a secret mission is so interesting and mysterious. What could it be? Seeing how all of them are using their powers together is so cool! Especially seeing Supernova in action is so unique and interesting! I really enjoy voltage and knowing she's a spy/traitor makes it so tense. The way you write Reverb is so cute and I love his interactions with Faye. Are they just friendly or does someone have a crush? It's cute either way and I just like how friendly they are, not just them but seeing how the group reacts to Ogong coming back too. And it's so ironic that he's looking for a traitor and then voltage strikes nightmare? So tense and dramatic! The group dynamics you've written really are great to read! And how they are using their powers in AN ACTUAL mission is really fun to read! But you left us on a cliffhanger! I'm excited for more!!
Vaniyya
#7
Chapter 12: I'm late! But I love how you are able to use all these characters povs! I also am so grateful for the subjects page because it helps for me to flip to it sometimes to remember someone! Aisa seems so interesting! I hope we see more of him! Gravikinesis sounds also like he'll be interesting because he's one of the newer villains maybe? But the transition to the heroes was well done too! I like hearing their thoughts and the interactions between Reverb and Faye was very cute! Nia and Aceso's interaction was also a mystery and what is happening to Paragon? I really enjoyed VR Angel's pov and also how you fit in Aceso's bitterness towards her having the angel name! And Bloody Dove definitely gives me jinx vibes for sure! This is going to be fun!
flvere
#8
Chapter 13: supernova's power sort of reminded me of dr strange when he was seeing all the possible futures in infinity war LOL and i love how the heroes are able to joke with one another. supernova sounds like a fun guy and i would def love to hear the gossip one day 🤣 also i had no idea about the ogong & vita incident... def need to catch up on reading the teasers.
it also totally went over my head that voltage was a spy, and right after the government asked ogong to keep an eye out for his team members the reveal happens. i wonder if there will be any changes to the team now that voltage has been revealed to be a spy as well as what the ring's purposes are for this mission. and ohhh the real and 777 on a secret mission? i'm v excited to see how the story will unfold <3
lastly, the interactions between reverb and faye are so cute my heart is <3 i had to go back to his app and saw his trivia where he hates driving and i'm definitely amazed by how you're able to capture all these little details onto the story! the gif on the left also seems to perfect capture how faye feels about working on this mission LOL
horyiah
#9
Chapter 13: your productivity is RIDICULOUS. and that's a compliment!
I had the subjects chapter open as I read along and I loved putting the names to faces and visualizing everything that was happening.
faye & reverb are adorable. very nice to see her having a friend by her side who puts a genuine smile on her face - which makes me sad for zeus because her two (2) friends are constantly elsewhere lol I thought she'd be snarkier towards supernova but her placidness makes sense as well since she's not close with everyone else and isn't in a relaxed environment.
I love how well you made the powers mesh together - reverb defeaning them, then faye removing their cover while nightmare makes their surroundings less visible? genius.
and while I already knew voltage was a spy from her app, the way it was dropped was amazing! I like how you utilised reverb for that as well.
this was a great read! super excited for what's coming <3
BanaWarrior
#10
Chapter 12: What I love with this being the last teaser, is that when you look back to the others, you can clearly see a thread of plot linking them together. And even if all the characters here were new to us, somewhat it didn't feel clunky or weird. It felt very smooth and grounded. Everyone had their roles, they interacted like they knew each other when they did, and nothing felt over-explained (or under-explained). Maybe the profile of the characters helped to at least put names to faces. But in general, this was a great cliffhanger to end (or maybe start!) the story.

Also, I see that Dove seems quite dramatic in her actions, and her profile doesn't say she's exactly allied with the Ring, even if she did help them. Any chance that she's free to join the Brotherhood? xD