Chapter Twenty-Two

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
January 6-7, 1998
"Family. Whatever ya' say, blood's important..."
 
Claire is quite proud of how well the Underground is doing these days. Really, she is.
 
Their efforts to save and relocate Muggleborns is going almost impossibly well - terrible as she feels thinking it, Claire would have to admit that Saundra dying might have been the best possible thing to happen to the Underground, considering it's been thriving ever since.
 
They have four actively operational safehouses within the country limits - two within London and two out in the country - and two nearly-active out-of-country escape paths (with a third supposedly in the works). That had been one of their biggest struggles for a while - neither Claire nor Rat had easy access to the Port Key offices and hadn't been able to determine if they could recruit anyone there, but Python says a new member fixed that problem so they should have most of the Muggleborns currently hunkered down at the safehouses out of the country within the next week.
 
Python has ended up taking charge of most of the Field Agent Branch, since she had easier access to the non-Ministry personnel who would be better suited to the roles, and she runs the medical parts of it as well. Rat is in charge of safehouse maintenance and communication as well as Muggleborn relocation between the houses.
 
In less than three months they've safely found, treated, and hidden over two dozen Muggleborns. And Claire is very proud of them for it.
 
It's just that she is no longer doing very much, and she's getting antsy.
 
Muggleborns had wised up to the trials somewhere around mid-November and stopped showing up, and when the Ministry started sending out people to collect the Muggleborns directly they'd find their homes already abandoned.
 
Claire is one of a five-person skeleton crew still manning the Muggleborn Registration Commission offices - everyone else has been transferred back to their original positions. Claire is painfully jealous of them, considering she has exactly as much to do for the Ministry as she does the Underground - which is to say, very little at all.
 
For a week or so she'd been going down to records to erase and rework Muggleborn records, but Python had recruited one of the actual Record Keepers to continue that line of work as she'd said Claire was starting to look suspicious. Claire supposes Rat probably raised that alert, and it probably saved her hide, but she's still a little bitter nonetheless. All her old responsibilities are now being handled by other people.
 
She's still technically a leader for the Underground - she does a lot of the Ministry recruiting and even brought in three of their four safe house directors - but things are almost running themselves at this point.
 
The result of the double whammy of both her jobs not needing her is that she's spending a lot more time at home, which is a blessing in some ways, but a curse in a whole lot more, especially after the last months of ninety-seven being so demanding she was barely home at all.
 
Now she's being forced to either sit in an office listening to Rookwood be incompetent for hours on end, usually bored out of her mind due to the lack of work to get done, or she comes home early and has to spend time with her family, which is unfortunate because it's really driving home how much she loves them, and how completely and totally she's going against them through her work with the Underground.
 
Her saving grace is a small, regular meeting that she and Python have each week to share updates. Occasionally other Underground members will show up as well - usually one of Claire's Ministry recruits but occasionally one of the field agents or safe house operators pops in to give information they didn't want to send by messenger. The first week of January they're scheduled for Wednesday evening and by Tuesday Claire is already getting anxious to go.
 
Her brother notices her nerves (he notices everything these days, and she somewhat resentfully wishes he'd been like this during school, not now when she needs him to be his usual oblivious self) and takes it upon himself to try and spend even more time with her - which is the opposite of helpful.
 
"Did you ever successfully cast a Patronus in school? I forget." Max throws out as the two of them lounge in the sitting room in front of the roaring fire Claire had lit a few minutes before when she'd first entered the room. Max had followed her shortly after and decided to engage in more "bonding" as he's taken to jokingly calling it.
 
She sighs, knowing from experience the past few weeks that trying to avoid the conversation will only make her brother that much more dogged in his pursuit of it. "No, I never did and I still can't. I sometimes can get one out as incorporeal but that's about it."
 
Max snorts. "Better than me then, I never got anything." He declares. "Biggest disappointment dad ever had apparently. We ran into some dementors on our last trip, and got me thinking I should probably go back to trying to cast one. Wanna practice with me?"
 
On the one hand, it's something to do, and probably something that will be useful down the line as the war gets more violent (the field agents are already seeing it with the Snatchers - they've lost three Muggleborns, and though they've saved far more it doesn't change the fact that those failures are disheartening). On the other hand it's guaranteed endless hours with her brother, constantly having to be hyper aware of the pit in her stomach that forms whenever she remembers that she's fighting against everything he believes in. And while she doesn't regret it, it's sometimes hard to listen to the other Underground members curse against the Dark Lord's followers when one of them is someone she honestly loves.
 
"I dunno, work might pick up again." She says eventually. "I don't want to commit to something if Madame Umbridge needs me again. They are working on new methods to track the fugitives you know." She refuses to call them Mudbloods, even if it would mean solidifying her cover.
 
Max hums. "True, they reorganized the leadership of that group in charge of it recently, didn't they? That seems to have helped. I don't know the details but one of them is actually a guy I knew from school. He's three years younger than me but he was a fantastic Quidditch player." He grins. "He was quite the character in school though - it's hard to forget Theodore Yaxley, that's for sure."
 
Claire shrugs - she remembers Yaxley well enough as she'd quite enjoyed Quidditch during her school years. And though Theodore was never as notorious as Slytherin Captains Mayra Byrne or Melissa Tatum, he was a known figure among Gryffindor fans due to his intense rivalry with the Gryffindor Keeper and Captain Kent Sylvester. She mostly remembers him being a slimeball, which she supposes does fit with Max's 'quite a character' description.
 
"He was." She agrees lightly, "Though I probably knew him less than even you did."
 
"Oh yeah, you guys would have crossed paths to." Max acknowledges. "Man, sometimes I forget that we did go to school at the same time."
 
"Only for two years, and it's not like you ever paid me much attention." Claire points out with a half-forced smile. "We weren't that close until after I graduated."
 
And we'll probably lose this again when you find out what I'm doing.
 
"Well you were a baby, it wasn't exactly cool to hang with you." Max defends with an easy laugh.
 
"And a Gryffindor." Claire can't help adding. Hopefully no bitterness slipped into her tone, but the divide caused by their Houses has always been a sore spot. Her family may have been okay with her being sorted into Gryffindor, it's not like she was the first in the family to do so, but her being proud to be a Gryffindor is less acceptable.
 
To her surprise though, Max doesn't grimace the way her father does, or shift uncomfortably like her mother. He just shrugs slightly. "Eh, school was school. The whole House thing was kind of stupid, don't you think? I mean, I'm a huge fan of the Appleby Arrows and Laurel Hobbes is one of their starting Beaters. If I clung to nonsense from school I'd have to still hate her on principle for leading the Gryffindor Quidditch team, which is stupid, she's a great player and I respect her for it." He snorts. "Though yeah, during school the Gryffindor thing was a bit of a problem."
 
Claire blinks and stares at him hard. Eight years out of school and this is the first time she's heard anyone in her family (other than her cousin Petra, who was also in Gryffindor) say anything positive about her house. It doesn't make sense though - if Max is okay with Gryffindors, why is he fighting for the Dark Lord?
 
Max raises an eyebrow. "Why the surprise Claire? I'm hurt you'd think I'd keep judging people based on what House they were sorted into, I'm more mature than that." He grins wickedly. "You don't seem to have outgrown it yet though little sister, maybe you should keep an eye on that." It's teasing, but Claire suddenly feels bad. Hasn't she been working with a Slytherin for months now? Maybe even more - she does know all the code names of the twenty-two active Underground members, but she doesn't actually know all of them. Any one could be a Slytherin, proudly fighting for what's right, and here she is still thinking that snakes are mostly bad because of a school rivalry.
 
"Sorry." She says after a moment. "I guess school-time bias sticks around if you don't take the time to weed it out."
 
Max shrugs. "Honestly if it wasn't for you and Petra I probably would still have some of it myself, but you two are alright so some other lions must be as well."
 
She laughs. "That's one way to look at it." She agrees.
 
They chat idly for another hour or so, before their mother calls them in for dinner. Mr. Rosier isn't present for dinner - he hasn't been in a few days - which Claire knows means he's off doing dirty work for the Dark Lord. The knowledge sits heavy and uncomfortable in her gut, not leaving much room for the meal her mother presents her.
 
Her mother definitely notices her poor appetite, frowning pointedly at Claire's plate multiple time throughout the meal, but Claire really can't stomach more than half of it, and she excuses herself about a half hour later, cleaning up her plate and escaping up to her room.
 
She debates taking a walk to try and distract herself, but it's cold and miserable outside and she can think just as well from the warmth and comfort of her own bed. She just needs to make sure those thoughts stay on the Underground and what she needs to report to Python tomorrow and not drift over to her family and what horrible things her father might be doing right now.
 
Maybe she can try and come up with some good arguments as to why Python should take some of Rat's jobs and let Claire handle them instead - Rat already has plenty to do, and Claire is pretty sure at this point that Python isn't giving her more work out of spite more than anything else. The other woman doesn't make it easy to work with her, that's for sure. Maybe that's why Claire still has such a poor opinion of Slytherins.
 
Thankfully her attempt at self-distraction works like a charm, and before she knows it she's fallen asleep at her desk, waking up again sometime after midnight only to climb under the comforter before curling up again and returning to her dreams.
 
The next morning is rather sedate, as her mornings usually are these days. Though she technically needs to be at work by nine, no one particularly cares if she's late since she only ever needs an hour at most to complete her work for the day. Plus, she's one of the most senior member of the Commission now, so no one would dare try and call her out for coming in whenever she feels like. It would be nice if she didn't know that the reason behind the show of respect is her last name, and what people assume about her because of it.
 
Still, Python is always reminding her and anyone else who shows up to their meetings to use every advantage they have, and the benefit of the doubt being a Rosier gets her isn't something Claire will complain about. Be irked by, sure, but never complain (especially not after the lecture Python gave her the one time she did).
 
Breakfast is serve yourself and Claire asks Max where their mother is as she sets about making eggs, since they only have to fend for themselves when she's had to leave in a hurry.
 
He frowns slightly at the question. "Not sure sis, she was leaving just as I was waking up, and didn't really give me much of an explanation. I just hope dad is alright."
 
Claire frowns as well - that's where her mind had gone too, and she'd been hoping Max would alleviate her concerns. "Well, we can't know until we know." She sighs. "What are you up to today?"
 
He perks up slightly. "Going to the Ministry actually, did you want to Apparate over together?"
 
Claire raises an eyebrow and turns away from her eggs for a moment so she can look directly at her brother. "I mean, of course, but why are you going there? I thought you found paperwork terribly boring."
 
He laughs. "Still do, and I don't need your lecture about it Claire." He teases. "But I'm thinking of applying for a position there, I saw an ad in the Prophet this morning that actually sounded interesting. Figured I'd throw my hat in the ring."
 
Claire grins at him as she finishes making her breakfast and dumps half of it onto a plate. "Mum will be thrilled to hear you finally have a real job." She laughs, and he grins even as he rolls his eyes.
 
"Bartending is a real job and Tom pays really well, as you all well know." Max snipes back and Claire drops the eggs in front of him before going back to put the rest on her own plate.
 
"At the very least you can make us all drinks when our days go poorly." Claire returns lightly.
 
Max winks. "Or to get you started before a long day." He adds and they both laugh. Breakfast is comfortable after that, and it isn't until they've gotten into separate lines to get into the Ministry an hour later that Claire thinks to wonder what job Max could possibly be interested in. He really does hate paperwork, and every department requires at least some forms filled out on a regular basis.
 
She turns the question over in her head a few times before mentally shrugging and deciding it doesn't really matter - knowing her brother he probably didn't realize exactly how much paperwork is involved across the board. It's a common misconception among the populace that Departments like the Department of Magical Games and Sports or the Aurors don't have to fill out any paperwork. Max probably just fell into the same trap.
 
Once she gets inside she heads up to the tenth floor and strides past Runcorn with an idle flap of her hand when he tries to point out that she's late. It's a practiced motion, one she actually learned from watching Python during their meetings, and she's found it quite effective in nonverbally declaring superiority. It works best on idiots and minion-types, of which Runcorn is both.
 
Due to the drastically lowered number of people moving through the office, the job has changed slightly. Now they're given unsealed documents and are charged with determining if the person accused is guilty or not. If they submit the file as a confirmed Muggleborn then the name is added to the Snatchers' list of targets.
 
Claire wishes she could just mark all the files as innocent, but it would be far too risky. Instead, she determines one or two people she can safely declare as falsely accused and then submit the other names to the Underground so those people can be protected.

She settles at her desk and lazily sorts through the files left on her desk, memorizing each name and keeping an eye on Runcorn as she does. He always leaves for a restroom break around ten thirty, which is when she'll silently grab her Underground wand and start making a few edits to the documents in front of her.
 
Today is a good day - one of the files before her doesn't even need any changes. The person's lineage, included in her file, clearly shows that she's descended from a Squib who in turn was part of a known pureblood family. Claire makes the necessary indications on the file and sets it aside before starting in on the others to sort out which ones she can safely change and which she'll need to pass on to the Field Agents for protection.
 
As expected, Runcorn departs at ten thirty sharp, and after glancing at the other Commission members, all of whom are clearly bored and barely paying attention to their own work nonetheless Claire's, Claire slides a hand into her robes to grip her Chestnut wand, while her Fir one stays out on the desk in plain view. A few murmured spells, accompanied by her free hand writing nonsense onto some parchment to cover what she's doing, quickly shifts some information on the files she'd deemed 'correctable' while the rest are sorted over into the 'submission' pile once she's confident she has the information memorized. She'll write it down with the rest this afternoon before heading to the meeting with Python.
 
She goes to hand in the reports to Runcorn, who glares.
 
"Umbridge wants to see you." He grumbles. "That secretary of hers said so this morning. So you can drop these off with her yourself."
 
Claire puffs up her chest and hopes it looks like pride as she turns and strides out of the room, still holding the files. Hopefully Runcorn will take that as a two- salute. Meanwhile her brain is whirling over why the Head of the Commission would want to see her. Did she slip up? She can't think of a time she did, but perhaps someone saw her changing files and ratted her out?
 
She takes the lift down to the first floor and swallows nervously as the doors slide open. Audrey Blishwick glances up from her desk, eyes as unreadable and unnerving as ever, and nods to the door behind her.
 
"She's in, she's expecting you." The woman says shortly, and Claire hums.

"Do you take these or does she want them directly?" She asks, holding up the files and waving them a bit for emphasis.
 
Audrey tilts her head. "I'll take them, thank you. I file them at the end of the day, so just put them there." She indicates a corner of her desk with a quill before turning back to what she'd been doing prior to Claire's arrival.
 
Claire drops the pile where indicated and then steps past Blishwick's desk to rap smartly on Umbridge's door.
 
"Come in!" The sickly sweet voice calls from inside, and Claire mentally steels herself as she pushes open the door and steps inside. She feels like she's locking herself in a cage with a feral animal as she shuts the door behind herself.
 
Umbridge looks as she always does, like a pink toad with a bow on its head, and her smile could probably poison children. The woman waves for Claire to take a seat, which she does somewhat hesitatingly.
 
"You wanted to see me Madame Umbridge?" She asks politely, crushing her urge to shudder as the woman's gaze settles on her fully.
 
"Don't worry Ms. Rosier, you aren't in trouble. Indeed your work ethic has been praised by your colleagues." Umbridge simpers, and though the tone is disturbing the sentiment does quite a bit to ease Claire's concerns. But if this isn't about the Underground being discovered, she's at a loss as to what she's been called in for.
 
Umbridge must read that on her face (and if that's the case she needs to practice) because she answers the unasked question. "As you know there have been some changes to the Fugitive Recovery Unit in recent months, and they are currently in the midst of hiring new employees."
 
Something in Claire begins to chill as her mind jumps ahead to what this might have to do with her. If Umbridge is volunteering her for that group she doesn't have any real reason to say no, but she can't leave her post with the Commission. She needs to be there to collect names for the Field Agents - none of her other operatives have the access she does, and obviously Rat doesn't either considering Claire being brought in at all.
 
Umbridge apparently doesn't notice her momentary panic as she continues chatting away. "I of course have offered to help them in whatever ways that I can, being in the position I am of course should make me very useful to them."
 
Claire detects a trace of irritation and a flash of amusement momentarily breaks through her panic - obviously Umbridge's help was rejected by the Unit.
 
"Anyway, they have a new applicant interviewing today and as he's your brother I thought you might have some insight into how he works! It will surely be useful to the Unit when considering his application."
 
Claire might have forgotten to breathe for a few moments. It would explain why she's suddenly so light-headed. Umbridge's words bounce around her head rapid-fire even as she struggles to keep a straight face, hoping the wretched toad will believe Claire is just thinking through the question and not having a mental break down.
 
So that's why Max is here. It certainly is a job without paperwork, logically it should have been the first one Claire thought of. And yet she hadn't even considered it. Hadn't really thought her brother would go that far, even knowing he's done some work with their father already.
 
But that was something distant, almost ignorable. This, this is the Snatchers. This is the main group the Underground is fighting against - and now Max is joining their ranks. Now she really is going directly against her family.
 
She clears . "He's a hard worker, but he didn't have the best grades in school. He's more practically minded than anything, so when it comes to working with his hands he's quite good, and he learns fast." It's all true, too. Max would be the perfect Snatcher.
 
Umbridge dismisses her after that with copious thanks, and Claire makes her way to the nearest restroom to empty out her stomach. She needs to get more responsibility in the Underground - she can't be home so often anymore, not now, not after this.
 
She isn't sure she'll even be able to look at her brother tonight, knowing what he's doing.
 
The rest of the day is a blur of denial and boredom, and she Apparates into their secret meeting place over the Hog's Head twenty minutes early because she doesn't want to go home but she doesn't want to stay in the Ministry past quitting time.
 
Python arrives only a few minutes after she does, and the woman raises an eyebrow, clearly curious about her presence.
 
"I normally come early to set up, but I suppose we can start now if you've got the names." She offers wryly, flicking a blonde strand of hair that's come loose from her bun away from her face.
 
"Just us today then?" Claire guesses, leaning against the wall. She doesn't trust the mattress enough to sit on it anymore - one comment about from a field agent was more than enough to make her wary.
 
"Panther is dropping in later, but you don't need to stick around for that." Python says dismissively. "He's been doing some side scouting to try and figure out if the Snatchers have a pattern so he's just giving me that to pass on to the rest of the Field Agents. Hopefully it'll be something useful, I'm getting tired of our Agents being injured or taken off guard by these idiots."
 
Claire suppresses a flinch at the Snatchers mention. She's here to not think about that.
 
"Sounds fine." She says briskly, trying to mimic Python's crafted ease with her tone. "I've got the list of Muggleborns to protect here, though there are five more names I hadn't added yet."
 
"Write them down, we've got time and I'm not so good at memorizing." Python says, making a face. "Any word on the Floo Network by the way? Bat reports to you on that one."
 
Claire groans mostly soundlessly at that question. Getting a private Floo System set up between the safe houses was one of the first things they agreed had to happen, but it's their only project that's had zero success. "Nothing new. I think Bat's about ready to murder her contact from how she talks about it these days." An idea suddenly hits her as she stands up and holds out the completed list to Python. "Actually, I wanted to talk to you about that."
 
Python raises an eyebrow, the only indication Claire gets to continue speaking.
 
She has to think on her feet how to pitch this, since she'd actually only just come up with it. "We need a different way to keep our Safehouses in communication." She says slowly. "And obviously Bat's working on it, but it's becoming a more immediate need each day we don't have it."
 
"I know all that Lion." Python says, an edge creeping into her voice.
 
Claire holds up her hands. "I know, I know, let me get there." She insists, mind flying. "I can facilitate more direct contact while we're waiting. I'm barely doing anything anymore - checking in on the safehouses will be easy and I can keep appraised of their situations as well. Win-win for everyone involved."
 
Python doesn't look convinced. "You can't just Apparate directly to all of our safehosues, you'll give away their locations."
 
"Then I'll personally message the owners of the ones too centrally located, but Rabbit especially has a hard time staying in contact since he's a Muggle and he's out on a farm in the middle of nowhere. No one's going to see me out there." Claire points out, still thinking hard to try and stay ahead of Python and get her to agree.
 
And thankfully she's looking thoughtful now. "That's true. This was less of an issue when major problems could just be directed through messengers..." She purses her lips, and Claire bites down on any further comments - that means Python is considering it.
 
It takes forever (or five minutes, whatever) before Python finally sighs and gives a short, sharp nod.
 
"Fine, you're in charge of the temporary communication between the safehouses until we can get the Floo connection up." She says with a slight sigh. "You'll need to stay now so you can tell Panther - he'll report it to the safehouse owners over the next few days. You can start Monday."
 
Claire can't prevent the massive grin that breaks across her face. "Great!" She says happily. "So can I help you set up?"
 
Pather arriving moments later renders the offer moot. He looks exhausted and rather battered. Python is immediately on alert.
 
"Were you followed?" She demands.
 
Panther shakes his head. "This is from earlier." He says shakily, gesturing broadly at his injuries. "I'm all healed, Setter was just getting off shift so she patched me up. More importantly, I ran into a group of fully fledged Deatheaters staking out a Muggle town on the outskirts of the Forest of Dean. I wans't expecting them, but they weren't expecting me either. I think they assumed I was Order, so we're good on secrecy." He adds as he lowers himself onto the mattress, clearly uncaring of the he himself had pointed out probably happened on it. "Took a couple of them down with me too, so maybe that will help things."
 
Claire and Python both congratulate him, and Claire urges him to be extra careful in the future. She knows Panther from school - he'd been a Gryffindor two years ahead of her and a prefect to boot - and she'd hate to see him killed in this.
 
Claire only lingers long enough after that to pass on her new role to Panther, who assures her all four safehouses will be informed by Monday, before she reluctantly Apparates back home.
 
She's startled to find that the lights are out and the house is silent. She steps across the threshold hesitantly, pulling out her wand defensively.
 
"Hello?" She calls tentatively. "Mom? Dad? Max? Anyone home?" It's just past six in the evening - there should be plenty of bustle, not this strange stillness.
 
She finds the note in the kitchen several minutes later, as it's the last room she canvases for intruders.
 
Max & Claire - 
 
At St. Mungo's. Your father was hurt on his last job. Meet us there when you get home.
 
Mom
 
Claire's heartbeat picks up and she remembers Pather's proud declaration that he'd hurt some of the deatheaters he'd surprised. She remembers congratulating him for it.
 
She's at Mungo's moments later, Apparating directly into the waiting room. Max waves her over and she hurries to sit beside him.
 
"They aren't letting us in, only mom." He says tensely. "She won't tell me how bad it is."
 
Which means, Claire knows, that it's really bad.
 
She excuses herself to the restroom where she's sick for the second time that day. She doesn't know how much longer she can keep this up.
 
Author's Note: HAPPY BIRTHDAY EMILY! :D Surprise double update!!!! I wish they were happier chapters, but the timeline is the timeline ^^'' Anyway, I hope everyone is doing alright in quarantine!!! And that you aren't in a Claire situation, stuck with people you have a hard time being around xD
 
Next Week: They say humans are social creatures, but she could do with some alone time right about now
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2452 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
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Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P