Review from HidayahF of Musicaholic

Title 3/5
I didn't think that the title is match with the story.Maybe later,I will change my mind...(I think so XD)

Poster and background 5/5
Wow!It's so nice and cute!!!I love GuiLun!!!

forewords 8/10
I love it a lot!Got synopsis and character biography!But only the orders is not that right.You should put the synopsis first.Then,character biography.

Plot 7/10
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Flow 7/10
I think it's ok..But sometimes i found it fast..Well,not that fast..

Spelling/grammar/vocabulary 10/15
I found some mistakes.One of it is the use of the word 'fell'.It is a word for fall in past tense right?Look carefully at this word..'She can fell the warm of his body while her heartbeats pumps faster and faster.'.The word 'fell'.You didn't use it correctly.It should be feel or felt.Not fell.Fell & Feel are diferrent!You have to improve your grammar.

Creativity/origniality 7/10
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writing style 5/5
Your writing style is ok with me.Well done!

Idioms/use of words/quotes 5/10
No comment~

overall enjoyments 10/10
I'm totally enjoy this story!I love it!I'm a GuiLun fan!So of course I love this story!!Hehe...By the way,hope to see your story more on winglin!!I know that you will be a good writer in the future~

Total 67/90

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Well it think my score is fair enough... ^_^ and next time I'll check what I've wrote before i post it here,, to lessen some typographical errors.. hahaha.. thanks HidayahF for being honest.. at least you enjoyed it.. ^_^