7thhaven Serendipity By syamimiyana R Read Story ◀ View Author ◀ Credit Us ◀   Reviewer xXxmani923xXx   Duration 12.12.15 to 12.14.15   Genre angst, school life   Characters Bts   Overall Grade 90.5%   KEYpoints Title: 5/5 The title fits very well witth the storyline.

Poster: 5/5 Your poster looks very awesome. It definitely draws the reader's attention.

Description + Foreword: 10/10
“You give just enough information to lure your reader's to read your story. It is not too detailed and is not lacking in details either.

Layout: 4/5 The layout of your story can be confusing at times, especially when you're using flashbacks. I would maybe suggest using less flashbacks to describe what happened to Taehyung and the oc in the past but have Taehyung describe it himself to give your story more detail and more structure. Plus, if you do it like that, it will give your readers a sense of how Taehyung feels as he's explaining his experiences. Your dialouge was well written too, except for gramatical errors.

Characterization: 14/15 Because your story has just begun, there wasn't a whole lot of character development but I could get a general idea of each character so far with personality traits, family background, etc.

Plot & Flow: 28/30 As I read, I felt your story wasn't detailed enough, which led me into confusion quite a bit. I would suggest going back and editing more details into your story to make it longer. Overall length of your story really isn't an issue but the details will help you back up your ideas in each paragraph you write to help the readers understand what your character's (whatev