[R] The Bad Boy's Good Girl- Joshy-Muahh
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The Bad Boy's Good Girl
By Joshy-muahh
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Reviewer
Lightning6
Duration
12.3.15 to 12.3.15
Genre
Action, romance
Characters
Seventeen,Bts
Overall Grade
79%
KEYpoints
Title: 5/5 Your title suits the plot and main point of the story, so i can’t say much about that~
Poster: 5/5 I’m not one for judging posters, but i did find that it draws attention to others, to get them interested to at least read what your story is about.
Description + Foreword: 8.5/10 Both you description and foreword were great, but you seemed to have mixed up the two.
The description is for the description of the story, so like a summary or just a little snippet of the story.
And the foreword is for the author notes, and other things that you’d like to tell the readers about the story.
Ex: The characters that are in it, Genre, is there anything rated in it? Kind of thing~
Layout: 5/5 Your layout was very well organized, and i really liked the font you used because it fit the ansgty romance feeling of the story.
Characterization: 13.5/15 Your characters are very good at speaking for themselves. They are very detailed about how they feel, speak, and see. But i still think you can add a few things onto when your character does something like this.
Ex: He loves smiling.
Can be turned into something that makes her seem more happy and excited in a way.
Ex: Wow… He really loves to smile.
I just find it helps with making the chapters longer and more detailed, and it just helps with Characterizing in general.
Plot & Flow: 26/30 You had a great idea for a story, but like i said above, you need more details with how your character
Poster: 5/5 I’m not one for judging posters, but i did find that it draws attention to others, to get them interested to at least read what your story is about.
Description + Foreword: 8.5/10 Both you description and foreword were great, but you seemed to have mixed up the two.
The description is for the description of the story, so like a summary or just a little snippet of the story.
And the foreword is for the author notes, and other things that you’d like to tell the readers about the story.
Ex: The characters that are in it, Genre, is there anything rated in it? Kind of thing~
Layout: 5/5 Your layout was very well organized, and i really liked the font you used because it fit the ansgty romance feeling of the story.
Characterization: 13.5/15 Your characters are very good at speaking for themselves. They are very detailed about how they feel, speak, and see. But i still think you can add a few things onto when your character does something like this.
Ex: He loves smiling.
Can be turned into something that makes her seem more happy and excited in a way.
Ex: Wow… He really loves to smile.
I just find it helps with making the chapters longer and more detailed, and it just helps with Characterizing in general.
Plot & Flow: 26/30 You had a great idea for a story, but like i said above, you need more details with how your character
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