7thhaven One night in seoul By Fusionspeaks R Read Story ◀ View Author ◀ Credit Us ◀   Reviewer Lightning6   Duration 11.27.15 to 11.27.15   Genre Romance, Friendship   Characters Taehyung, Hoseok   Overall Grade 98%   KEYpoints Title: 5/5 Your title fit the story very well.

Poster: 5/5 The poster really fits the theme of your story, and it fits the title well too. 

Description + Foreword: 10/10 Your description was well said. It was short, cute and interesting at the same time

Layout: 5/5 Your story was well organized, and the font you used fit the story well!

Characterization: 15/15 Your characters are very good at speaking for themselves. If you know what i mean. The way your characters spoke and felt made me feel as though i could be them.

Plot & Flow: 30/30 You had a really good idea for a story, which you could have made the whole one-shot into a story! Your flow is just right, that way that your characters would get to know each other was well paced.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 18/20 You didn't have any grammar mistakes from what i could see, but i did notice a few places where you ponctuation was not spaced, or just not used properly. And i found that another thing was that your said "What're" That's not very good vocabulary, so i would suggest you change it to "What are" Just so it sounds bet

Personal Enjoyment: 10/10 I enjoyed the one-shot + the sequel haha.  Revie