[R] Born Hater- xXxmani923xXx

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7thhaven Born Hater By xXxmani923xXx R Read Story ◀ View Author ◀ Credit Us ◀   Reviewer Lightning6   Duration 12.5.15 to 12.6.15   Genre Drama/Romance and Comedy, some   Characters Kai, Hanbin, Sungmin, OC   Overall Grade 93.5%   KEYpoints Title: 5/5 Your title fits the plot and the idea of the story well.

Poster: 3.5/5 The poster honestly could have been made better, since it wasn't that appealing. And whoever made it didn't put capitals on your title in the poster.

Description + Foreword: 10/10 Your description and foreword were used properly and they were very organized, and your trailers were interesting to watch and they honestly caught my attention more than the poster did.

Layout: 3/5 Your story was very organized, and the font you chose was very simple but fit the story well. One thing that i didn't really like was all the Pov changed in the chapters. I find that it was a little confusing from time to time. I would suggest that you should only change Pov's when you have started a new chapter, so that your readers don't get really confused with all the different Pov's in just one chapter. But if you still want to change the Pov's in chapters, i would make them longer and more detailed so that it doesn't seem like your changing it after only 5 sentences all the time. 

Characterization: 15/15 I really like your characters. And the way your characters speak and feel, are very realistic. Y
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syamimiyana- Review #2 is finished~^^

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