7thhaven Midnight journey By Fusionspeaks R Read Story ◀ View Author ◀ Credit Us ◀   Reviewer Lightning6   Duration 11.27.15 to 11.27.15   Genre Romance, angst, fluff, adventure   Characters Taehyung, Hoseok   Overall Grade 99%   KEYpoints Title: 5/5 Your title fit the story very well.

Poster: 5/5 You had no poster, but you will not lose marks for this.

Description + Foreword: 10/10 Your description was cute, and would grab peoples attention quickly. And thank you for putting in that trigger warning, not just for me, but for others, haha.

Layout: 5/5 Your story was well organized, and the font you used fit the story well!

Characterization: 15/15 Your characters are very good at speaking for themselves. As i said for the other story review. haha. Keep it up^^

Plot & Flow: 30/30 The way you continued your story was great, everything fit well and you are really good at the angst types of stories~

Grammar & Vocabulary: 19/20 You didn't have any grammar mistakes, But one thing i would change is that you do "-" a lot, when you are describing something, or continuing a sentence. I would change that to just using "," since it makes more sense.

Personal Enjoyment: 10/10 I enjoyed reading both of your one-shots~ haha Reviewer's Notes Thank you for requsting again! I hope that this review was helpful in some way~ And if you have any questions, please ask me through either comment