[R] Don't Choose The Latter- kukunoona
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7thhaven
Don't Choose The Latter
By kukunoona
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Reviewer
Lightning6
Duration
12.8.15 to 12.8.15
Genre
angst, romance
Characters
Junghan, Jisoo
Overall Grade
97%
KEYpoints
Title: 5/5 Your title was well chosen, and it fit the theme and plot of the story well~
Poster: 3.5/5 Honestly, i think you poster could have been made much better. Since i find that the type of font you used for the title and just the way it was made, was done poorly. And it didn't really fit the Angst feeling, it seems to be more on the Romance and Fluff side.
Description + Foreword: 10/10 I have to thank you for using your D&F properly! And it was well written, it didn’t reveal too much, and it was just enough information for people to find it interesting and want to read the short story.
Layout: 5/5 Your layout was very well organized, the fonts and colours were well chosen and used well.
Characterization: 15/15 The way that you made your characters let them talk for themselves, and the way they were detailed were very well done. The feelings and actions your character did were well detailed.
Plot & Flow: 30/30 Your story had a really good angst feeling to it, and it was very detailed in the part. You chose a very good idea for the story, and you turned it into something that many people would enjoy reading about, and the characters you picked and how they went
Poster: 3.5/5 Honestly, i think you poster could have been made much better. Since i find that the type of font you used for the title and just the way it was made, was done poorly. And it didn't really fit the Angst feeling, it seems to be more on the Romance and Fluff side.
Description + Foreword: 10/10 I have to thank you for using your D&F properly! And it was well written, it didn’t reveal too much, and it was just enough information for people to find it interesting and want to read the short story.
Layout: 5/5 Your layout was very well organized, the fonts and colours were well chosen and used well.
Characterization: 15/15 The way that you made your characters let them talk for themselves, and the way they were detailed were very well done. The feelings and actions your character did were well detailed.
Plot & Flow: 30/30 Your story had a really good angst feeling to it, and it was very detailed in the part. You chose a very good idea for the story, and you turned it into something that many people would enjoy reading about, and the characters you picked and how they went
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