7thhaven An angel's story By xolovemiyu R Read Story ◀ View Author ◀ Credit Us ◀   Reviewer Lightning6   Duration 11.28.15 to 11.28.15   Genre Romance   Characters Taehyung, Im Eunmi(OC)   Overall Grade 98%   KEYpoints Title: 5/5 Your title fit the story very well!^^

Poster: 5/5 You had no poster, but you will not lose marks for this.

Description + Foreword: 10/10 Your description was cute, and would grab peoples attention quickly. 

Layout: 5/5 Your story was very well organized

Characterization: 14/15 Your characters are very good at speaking for themselves. But i think you could use a little more detail about how your characters are feeling, instead of using just words~

Plot & Flow: 29/30 The way you continued your story was great, Your flow was great! And to answer your question, no your plot is not cliché, but maybe just at the end, when it was a dream was a little more cliché, since i find with a lot of stories with deaths, they do that kind of thing where the character wasn't actually dead the whole time.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 20/20 You did not have any grammar or vocabulary mistakes from what i could see, you did a good job of reviewing your story.

Personal Enjoyment: 10/10 I really enjoyed reading this one-shot. And if i were writing a story like this, i would make it into an actual story, since the plot you chose could turn into something way bigger than just a