Beast et Beauty By: KangminBread . Title 4/5: I liked the title, it suits the story well~ But one thing that i would change is that, Beast et Beauty just means Beast and Beauty. And me being canadian and fluent in french just doesn't really make sense. I would suggest put in Beast et le Beauty, So that it says Beast and the Beauty. I just find it makes more sense both in english and in french.

Poster 5/5: Your poster was very well done and fit the theme of your story great!

Description & Foreword 10/10: I like your description! It was short, but well written.
Layout 5/5: Your story is very organized and neat~

Characterization 15/15: You are very deatailed with your characters, the way they spoke and felt, was well detailed.

Plot 28/30: You have a very good idea and it turned into a great story. Your story moves a little fast, but not too much, since you detailed it pretty good~

Grammar and vocabulary 16/20: You had no grammar mistakes from what i read. But one thing I noticed, right at the beginning of your story, was that this line : "The loud cheers of kids startled Sungmin awake, erasing from his mind the dream he just had." Was good at the beginning, but at the end " erasing from his mind the dream he just had" Should be "Erasing the dream he just had from his mind." It's just more proper english.  And you are missing commas in a few places, that would need one. Since your sentences are making sense, but i