Lovers of lost dimensions- Kangminbread
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Lovers of lost dimensions By: KangminBread . Title 5/5: The title suited the chapter well, it went well with the them of the chapter
Poster 5/5: You didn't have a poster, but you don't loose points for this~^^
Description & Foreword 10/10: No description since it was only a chapter. Do not loose points for this~
Layout 5/5: Your story is very organized and neat~
Characterization 15/15: The characterization is very well done, very well thought out.
Plot 30/30: The plot was great! Your chapters are very long, and detailed, which is loved by all readers~^^
It had a very good pace also.
Grammar and vocabulary 20/20: There is no need for me to review this, since i beta read this chapter~
Personal Enjoyment 10/10:I enjoyed reading the chapter, it enjoyable and interseting to read^^
Total: 100/100
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