7thhaven THE BREATH By gaksitalGaksital R Read Story ◀ View Author ◀ Credit Us ◀   Reviewer Zutrazelle   Duration 12.4.15 to 12.6.15   Genre friendship, angst   Characters Snsd   Overall Grade 97%   KEYpoints Title: 5/5 Your title is really good! Not only does it sound a bit mysterious, but it also fits your story well!

Poster: 5/5 The poster was simply beautiful. The poster gives me that nature feels, and that’s one of the things your story radiates. The blending was nice too. The pictures chosen for the poster suits the characters in the story.

Description + Foreword: 10/10 The purpose of a description is that it excites the readers, and I can say that your description did the trick. The foreword is used in two different ways:
1) Giving a sneak peak and
2) Message from the author.
You did both of those things and I’m impressed of the outcome of the foreword. It excited me more, and it made me expect more.

Layout: 4/5 The layout fits the theme well, but I can’t say about the same about the font. The color fits in so well with the layout that sometimes, I have to highlight the words in order to read it. Still, your choice of font was pretty good.

Characterization: 15/15 I really like your characters. The whole story describes Juhyun and Taeyeon’s friendship, and I can feel the interaction between those two characters. They were both described well! I got fond of Juhyun’s thoughts, and I