The old story

Chen's Story and Suho's Little Box

“I can’t walk,” say Tao at the phone this lunch as we put it on speaker.

“HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHHAHAAHHAHAAHHAHAHHAAHHAHAHHHAHAHAHHAHHAHAAHHAHSAHHSHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHAHAHHAHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHA ( I am too lazy to write more)”

Tao was found absent this morning after what happen yesterday and even though we know the reason, we decide to call him.

“How’s your ?”

“My is beating like a heartbeat. How is your Kris?”

“You eat them up yesterday,” laugh Kris.

“Oh yeah,” I can hear Tao smile, “Anyway, I actually got to go right now for some reasons so see you guys tomorrow,”

“You’re coming back tomorrow? That is fast,”

“Yeah, Kris’s is not as big I thought it will be so..” he hang up.

“I don’t have small ,” correct Kris as the bell ring.

“Admit it Kris, we all saw your and Xiumin’s is bigger than yours,” I say and cut Kris before he continue talking, “Oh, look, there is Heechul and Sunn, I got to go to class,” I pull Xiumin and go to class.

 

 

Night time, I am at my house at the verandah enjoying the fresh night air when I hear the door open from behind. It is Suho, he is wearing his pajamas and there is sheets of papers on his hand.

“Get out,” I say obviously annoyed.

“This is not your house, come on,” say Suho as he sit beside me but try not to be too close. There is a silence for a while between us but Suho break it, “Beauty and the Beast is finally over huh?”

“Yeah,” I say simply.

“Do you like that story, actually?”

“I don’t know,” I say lifting up my shoulders.

“Huh,” respond Suho, “By the way, just now, I went to the attic to find some stuff,”

“Oh,” I reply shortly.

Suho sigh a little, “Do you know what I found?”

“The thing that you hold in your hand?”

Suho smile a little, “Wow, you surely grow up so fast,” I roll my eyes, “well, yeah, I did found this there. Do you know what it is?” I shake my head, “Well, this is your story that you wrote 5 years ago,”

“You still keep that?”

“Maybe mom did,” he say as he flip through the pages even when it is short, “But I read it, and I thought that among all bestselling stories you ever created, this is the best one,” He give me that paper and stand up, “I really wish you can forgive me like that character,” he leave me alone in the cold night.

After he leave, I read the title out loud, “Forgive,”

 

 

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For those who don't read the read this: So, I reveal in that that Kris fall in love with Tao but no one know about it even Tao himself. Well, that is the information.

So, this is a really short update but the next chapter will be the one-shot of Chen's story forgive soo.. emm.... subscribe, and comment to make me happy and upvote if possible thanks ::)

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ostatxu18
#1
Chapter 20: I thought this was a suchen fic. You have written too many chapters and I do not see suchen anywhere. The part of the xiuchen are doing great but, why so many irrelevant characters appear in your story? You keep adding groups and more groups and people who have nothing to do with the plot and only lengthen it unnecessarily. I hope you can improve that and I really think that the stories are best when they focus on one thing and they develop since that point. You started the fanfic with suchen, in the third chapter you changed the story to life as a writer and singer of Chen and his adventures in his agency and the members of SNSD and SJ and GOT7 ..... and more and more people unnecessarily. In the middle, you have introduced the history of xiuchen and anger of Chen by what happened at the club in a very sporadic and a very rough finish. However, this fic, which began as a xiuchen / suchen, of xiuchen being boyfriends and suchen being secretly brothers. Now is not anything like that. What happened to the box of Suho? What happened with the relationship of Suho and Chen? those are the main issues of history and you are avoiding to answer. Just sorry I started reading this fic lively and finished angry because I felt wasting my time. I'm really sorry, perhaps this fic is not for me. And I'm sorry again if I am very critical, I also write fic and I understand the work that is going on, but that is why I like being told what people think of it. Finally, it also sorry for my English is not my native language and I try to improve it but I still have a long way. Thank you for your fic and I hope that can continue.
GalakshyFanfan #2
awwww taoris <3 ;;;;;
pooppoop #3
Wonderful~
guangmingcha
#4
Chapter 11: Ahh fck you chen im so mad at him what a jerk ugh xD
taratata #5
Chapter 2: wow..what secret that suho had? cant wait for another story...