Freedom

Smashing The Hourglass
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5 Years Ago

 

“Go back! You have to go back!” Suho shouted from the back seat. “I can’t!” Kris yells back only to receive several weak hits from Jae. “Please! You have to! We can’t just leave her there,” Jae weeps pitifully.

She wasn’t the only one either. After Miah’s whispered goodbye they were all crying. Eyes rimmed red and stinging; their hearts were beating in a joined erraticness.

Kris wanted to do as they asked. He wanted to turn around and go back for Miah, but he wasn’t the one driving away. The damned vehicle was moving on its own, pushing them farther and farther down the bridge. Farther and farther away from the evaporating fog at their backs.

“I can’t leave without her! I can’t let her sacrifice herself for me! Just unlock the doors and I’ll go back myself,” Suho erupted again. He was angry at what Miah did, but more angry at himself for not foreseeing it. It was so obvious. She as so obvious, so how could he be so oblivious? He promised to protect her, and yet he kept breaking that promise.

He would say anything; cry and scream at Kris to turn around, but Suho knew that it wasn’t Kris’ fault. He knew that whatever was happening with the car was that girls fault. Alessa. She took Miah in exchange for him, and now she making sure Miah could never leave.

He failed her. He failed the person he had fallen in love with, and he never even got the chance to prove that love.

The car steered itself all the way back to the main road that would lead to the highway. When it stopped the car parked itself and turned off. Even the head lights which Kris had himself shut off pitching the three of them into darkness darker than black. It was a new moon out, meaning absolutely no light except for the stars twinkling faintly above them.

“It s-stopped finally. We c-can go back n-now. Kris turn the c-car on and go back,” Jae begged. Her sniffles were frequent making her words slightly jumbled and hard to understand.

Kris took a deep, calming breath and turned the ignition. It didn’t start. It didn’t even sputter.

“What’s going?” he mumbled to himself. He tried again, and still got nothing. “Son of a-. you’re really going to up right now!?” he yelled causing Jae, whose nerves were already shot, to jump in her seat.

“K-Kris? What’s wrong? Why w-won’t it start?” she asked. He shook his head without answering. He didn’t know; he didn’t understand. The car was working earlier, even before it was taken over by god knows what he was able to

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Mochi_Cream_Smile
#1
Chapter 27: OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH YEAH!!!!! SUHEUN MOMENT!!!YESH YESH~ she remembers, huzzah~ Thank you for updating!!!!!!!! ^^
Bookworm01
#2
Chapter 24: Eh? Junggie was there the entire time? But... How? So, he wasn't dead after all, was he? If Junggie's really (kind of) alive, how will Jae and the gang leave? I can't wait! LOL, I'm joking. I can wait a long time. ;-)
I really want to see how Miah would react to the orders of Alessa. It's a twisted test of friendship. I hope that Junggie's message to Miah doesn't go unheard. It's an important one...

Thank you for updating! I'm always ECSTATIC when you update! ^o^
Bookworm01
#3
Chapter 23: Thank you for updating! I missed this story so much!
Mochi_Cream_Smile
#4
Chapter 23: Oh. MEH. GERSH. THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!!!! I WAS SO HAPPY WHEN I SAW THAT THIS STORY UPDATED! THANK YOU!!!
KimSuhooo
#5
Chapter 28: Hi authornim~ I hope you will able to update this soon :) Im a fan of this stroy so yeah I will wait for your next update ^_^
Bookworm01
#6
Chapter 28: I hope that they achieve their goal. I think that they will, just a lot of difficulties. I can't wait for that hunting down scene of Miah. Hunting down her three friends? That's good. I'm not creepy. I just like this! It's so intriguing. Well, I hope you update soon. ^_^
Bookworm01
#7
Chapter 21: It's Chapter 17. :-)
jeyoun #8
Chapter 20: update soon
KimSuhooo
#9
Chapter 20: OMO She lost her memory what will happen to suho?? Update soon ^_^
KimSuhooo
#10
Chapter 19: OMO what happen to Kris? what will happen to Miah and Suho? they still love each other even Miah she still love suho...
Great Update Authornim~ I hope you will update soon ^_^