Not an update yet. need advices....

Untitled
so umm as much as i know im the author .. but its my first fanfic.. so before i continue i would like to have some suggestion >.<
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Rpr363
#1
Chapter 20: Oh no thor...ur story is good...but i kind dont expect ending like this,well the ending still have some problem hanging...i know 930 have a huge effects to all of us...
Rpr363
#2
Chapter 8: What happened to yoona??i think its related to fany condition....oke...lets it be taengsic...xixixi
Rpr363
#3
Chapter 6: I think its start to complicated
kimtaengsic #4
Chapter 2: Nice .......
yoondel
#5
You end the story like these author ssi because of what happen to Jessica right ? U lost interest to have a good ending because of Jessie's being kicked out from GG & now the termination of her contract :(
TBH, i know, we know, &, u know that the last chapter of the story is not really the ending, I mean it's shouldn't end up like these.. Overall your story is very awesome, but I'm so very disappointed w/ the ending, u can't called it an ending author ssi.. Sorry to say this, it's not a good ending to me, it isn't satisfy to all the readers TBH.. But I still respect that u chose to end the story like these eventhough it's very hanging to me .. Maybe u have to make a SEQUEL in this story eh ?

// sigh // It's very sad to know that u will stop writing a Yoonsic fanfic :(
other Yoonsic author also lost interest to write any Yoonsic story and I feel them, I feel u author ssi, but I hope even Yoonsic is not real anymore, then make it real in your story !!
I encouraged you to continue your writing about Yoonsic, just for us, the (Yoonsicretives) ..
That's all I can say ~
Fighting !
yoondel
#6
You end the story like these author ssi because of what happen to Jessica right ? U lost interest to have a good ending because of Jessie's being kicked out from GG & now the termination of her contract :(
TBH, i know, we know, &, u know that the last chapter of the story is not really the ending, I mean it's shouldn't end up like these.. Overall your story is very awesome, but I'm so very disappointed w/ the ending, u can't called it an ending author ssi.. Sorry to say this, it's not a good ending to me, it isn't satisfy to all the readers TBH.. But I still respect that u chose to end the story like these eventhough it's very hanging to me .. Maybe u have to make a SEQUEL in this story eh ?

// sigh // It's very sad to know that u will stop writing a Yoonsic fanfic :(
other Yoonsic author also lost interest to write any Yoonsic story and I feel them, I feel u author ssi, but I hope even Yoonsic is not real anymore, then make it real in your story !!
I encouraged you to continue your writing about Yoonsic, just for us, the (Yoonsicretives) ..
That's all I can say ~
Fighting !
HowlsMovingCastle #7
Chapter 20: I've just re-read all the chapters because I can't bring myself to remember the story line. Everything is clear now.
I want to thank you for finishing this story, even though it's an open ending but with the particular event happened, I understand your choice of how the fic ends.
I love YoonSic in every chapter, they show each other so much love and they care for each other a lot, even in real life they did those sort of affections too, I can't find any other couple who make me feel so much emotional when I look at them the way YoonSic did.
Again, thank you for having written this fic from the beginning till the very end.
Kiddie13 #8
Omo.. It took a long time for you to update, I even forgot how is the plot, keke but its okay I remember it now. Glad that yoonsic is together and will getting married soon, they dont have to feel suffered of separation anymore, hehe. Good story author, and good job!! Thanks for finishing this story :)
4everLoVeSNSD
#9
Chapter 20: Thank you for finishing....i hope one day you will make more yoonsic story. Or maybe yoonfany
allayjadhule #10
Chapter 20: Thor please make end Thor :( why Just shrot :(
Please mke eprloge Thor kaya itu waktu:) thank you for continiue for your storie Thor :)