Her Father

I'm Sorry It Was You
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My father scoffed disbelievingly. “You stupid girl!” he hissed, waving his hands around like weapons. “Do you have any idea what would have happened if you’d been seen by one of our clients? Or better yet, Oh Sehun himself? Are you even seeing him at all?” he bellowed, temple throbbing viciously.

Pushing myself up off the ground, I clutched onto the photographs tightly. I opened my mouth to tell my father that that was Oh Sehun that I was with, just the blonde version, but he held a hand up to me to silence my unspoken words.

“I really don’t know what the hell you have been doing all this time. But that,” his finger jabbed towards the photographs, “is not why you are here.” Again I tried to speak – tried to defend myself, but this time it was his words that cut me off. “I’m not finished!” he yelled, so loud that I actually felt myself flinch. “Do you even realise how much your image reflects onto me?”

I nodded my head, knowing he would not allow me any answer more advanced than this.

“What if someone other than Paz had seen you there? Lord knows, somebody probably did!” He began pacing then, breath becoming laboured as he considered all the things that could possibly go wrong as a result of me going to a kitchenware shop with a boy. “And if Sehun were to see you with this boy, how would that look? Huh?” He shook his head incredulously. “You just don’t think about these things, you stupid girl. How the hell am I supposed to leave my entire business empire to someone who acts like that?” Once again his finger was directed towards the photos in my hands.

I couldn’t remember the last time I had seen my father act like this, but it really couldn’t be good for his health. Instantly, I felt a little guilty. Sehun aside, I shouldn’t have been somewhere so public with an ‘unfamiliar’ boy because, like my father said, our business partner’s and clients could have seen me and that wouldn’t have looked too good. We made even have had a scandal on our hands.

“Don’t just stand there silently!” my father suddenly fired at me as if I hadn’t tried to speak several times already. “Say something!”

Lifting the pictures in my hands, I quietly stated, “It is Oh Sehun. The boy.”

My father’s face twitched involuntarily. “Blonde?” he asked almost scornfully. I suppose it was understandable that he hadn’t recognised the boy as Sehun given the colour of his hair.

“Yeah, he’s blonde now,” I explained simply, as if my earlier explanation wasn’t enough for it.

A grunt escaped my father’s lips as he took that in for a moment. “There’s no wonder he attends a school like he does . . .” he grumbled to himself. I wanted to tell him that, actually, Sehun is just as smart as me, if not more given that I’d never seen the boy studying. I don’t know where this sudden need to defend Sehun came from, but I supressed it before I could verbally say it. It was unlikely that my father would agree with me on this point, or appreciate my correcting him.

“Even if that is Sehun,” he continued, clearly still holding in a lot of pent up anger. “You should have known better than to walk with him somewhere like that.” My father was no longer shouting, but he still sounded angry.

“I understand,” I bowed my head. “I’ll be more careful in future.” A hum sounded from my father, but didn’t really sound like he believed me. “I will, Father.”

“Show me it, don’t tell me,” he said, backing away from me a little as he headed for the living room, nestling himself into one of the chairs snuggly. “Have you met his father yet?”

Before I could even think about which answer to tell him, there was a knock at my door. At first it didn’t register that it had sounded at all until my father cleared his throat and pointed around me to the door. “Who on earth is calling so late?”

I wondered that as well before a cold shiver passed down my back. It was Sehun. Of course it was Sehun! Swallowing uncomfortably, I walked over to living room, “It’s probably just someone trying to sell something. . .” Although I highly doubted that sort of thing happened in this building, I wasn’t about to let my father and Sehun meet – far less in m

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saltymuffin
#1
Chapter 61: Just finished this story and i must say that i really love it❤️❤️thankyou dear❣️xoxo
MultiStanK
#2
Chapter 38: Came back to this chapter after just having finished this story a few minutes ago, because the writing in this chapter is probably my favourite. I've never read a story with such delicate yet detailed kisses before and the writing just amazes me to no end.



I personally think that the delicateness of the kisses and the touches they share sort of describes them in a way. It's like they tipoe amongst each other, especially in this chapter, but are starting to realise that their footsteps needn't be calculated or uncertain, they can be more confident and understood.

I don't know if that made any sense lol so swiftly moving on. I came over here from EXO Fanfic Gems (plus other fandom pearls) and I'm so glad I did. Korekrypta mentioned when they were describing this book that you took a cliche trope and made it your own and I honestly couldn't agree more.

The descriptions you had for every scene, the realistic 1st person POV, just everything was so well written and well executed that you got me to read the whole thing, which is rare because I usually avoid stories that have more than 30 chapters unless I absolutely must know what happens.

You know, it's so easy to take a trope and come up with a story because of how many examples and references are out there but you made this story so completely your own. There was humorous banter (which is the best sort of banter, really), lovable character dynamics (I personally loved Mira's relation with her grandparents, it was so wholesome), interesting yet realistic events (never read about plate shopping before but I loved it) and best of all, one of the best romantic buildups I've read on asianfanfics.

Although I would have definitely loved seeing more of them as a couple because they didn't last very long considering how things turned out around the time of their hs graduation, this is probably the first story that has kept me so hooked even though the concrete, physical displays of love were in much lesser number in comparison to the looks and subtle touches of love.

It's rare to find someone who can do that well, so I end up reading books that have the first kind of love but yeah, I loved the way you wrote this relationship. It was so new and I admire your writing style a lot.

To wrap up my incredibly long comment, I'll answer your question from the last chapter, my favourite character is Mira, just for the amount of sheer character development she shows. She is amazing and deserves everything in the world. (Plus come on, angry little gnome sounds like just the sort of friend I would love to have in my life.)
WholesomeRain
#3
Chapter 16: Agfeavajagsjsh! Even when rereading, this story makes me so fangirlish lol
noonimm
#4
Chapter 61: What I love the most in this story is at the end, they are doing what they really want, not because of the parent.

Beakhyun is always my favourite from the start till the end lol
cheonchoni
#5
Chapter 38: She is so deaddddd
JiLin1998 #6
Chapter 1: I‘m excited for the Next Chapters!!
Ohayoungy #7
Chapter 53: I'm crying
Ohayoungy #8
Chapter 38: I love them both ♡♥
Ohayoungy #9
Chapter 20: Cute
WholesomeRain
#10
Chapter 61: GAHAHAGAHAGAFSAFAHA:((((((( I’m so sad it’s over!! As for the questions in the authors note: Baekhyuns my favorite (he’s the cutest!) and I’m not sure what my favorite chapter is, might just need to reread and find out;) I loved this storyyyy!!!