Unfamiliar

I'm Sorry It Was You
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That evening, I turned up at the diner Baekhyun had given me the address to and what I found was a small, but clean looking place. When I entered I found that I was the first one here. I took a seat and nervously twiddled my thumbs. It had been a long time since I had done anything like this, it felt weird to have no one here with me, or to have any topics of conversation in mind. I doubted Baekhyun and his friends wanted to hear about how the stock market was doing. I moved on to touching my now loose hair that sat in my natural curls; having a British mother did have its advantages. My outfit had been problematic as most of my clothing had branding on it, and I didn’t need anything to cause suspicion. In the end, I had to buy a jumper and jacket from a nearby store although neither were that bad.

"Is no one else here yet?" the voice of Baekhyun greeted me, causing me to stop fiddling with my hair. He smiled at me as he took in my altogether different appearance. "You scrub up well, Mira."

The next to arrive were the other two members of their wee group; Kai and Chanyeol. Both greeted me formally at first but once we started chatting they both insisted I call them informally so I did the same to be polite. Both seemed to be nice, I decided.

We were about to order our food when Sehun suddenly joined the group. Unlike the others, he had clearly made very little effort with his appearance. He wore a black hoodie, black jeans and a black cap, contrasting with his hair starkly. It was like he was going for a whole crow thing with his outfit.

He only glanced at me briefly, taking in my different appearance before ordering from the blushing waitress. He then whispered to Baekhyun, "Why did you invite her?  I said I wasn’t interested."

I don’t think I was supposed to hear, so I pretended to be playing with my empty glass which was fine, until Chanyeol offered to get me a refill. I just about heard Baekhyun whispering back, "I like her, she’s different."

Sehun pouted a little, clearly disagreeing that being different was a reason to like someone. I was a little insulted by him once again, but held my tongue. I had been raised better after all.

When the evening finally drew to a close, I felt altogether more relaxed being around three of them - all but Sehun.

It was late at night by this point, and the clubs were starting to empty allowing all kinds of people to wander onto the streets. I was walking one way and it seemed like the others were walking the other. Baekhyun offered to walk with me, but much to my surprise Sehun stepped up and, without looking at me, said to the others, "I’m going that way anyway. I’ll see you later." And led off as if I was supposed to follow.

I had to hurry just to catch up to him; he was a very fast walker. I couldn’t think of anything to say, nothing without sounding like a complete idiot.  

"Which way?" he suddenly asked, stopping at a junction.

My head snapped up as I looked at the unfamiliar crossing. This area of the city was a mystery to me. ‘Umm...’ I began, helplessly looking from one side of the street to the other.

He heaved a sigh, offering no assistance. 

Stupid blonde. I then peeked down either side of both streets, ignoring where Sehun stood planted. He watched me attempt this for about a minute before finally cocking his head to the side and asking, "What are you actually doing?"

I was so close to working it out, "Shh! You’ll distract me!" I instructed as I tilted my head to various angles in an attempt at finding my path.

After another minute, he asked me, "Are you not familiar with the area?" as if it

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saltymuffin
#1
Chapter 61: Just finished this story and i must say that i really love it❤️❤️thankyou dear❣️xoxo
MultiStanK
#2
Chapter 38: Came back to this chapter after just having finished this story a few minutes ago, because the writing in this chapter is probably my favourite. I've never read a story with such delicate yet detailed kisses before and the writing just amazes me to no end.



I personally think that the delicateness of the kisses and the touches they share sort of describes them in a way. It's like they tipoe amongst each other, especially in this chapter, but are starting to realise that their footsteps needn't be calculated or uncertain, they can be more confident and understood.

I don't know if that made any sense lol so swiftly moving on. I came over here from EXO Fanfic Gems (plus other fandom pearls) and I'm so glad I did. Korekrypta mentioned when they were describing this book that you took a cliche trope and made it your own and I honestly couldn't agree more.

The descriptions you had for every scene, the realistic 1st person POV, just everything was so well written and well executed that you got me to read the whole thing, which is rare because I usually avoid stories that have more than 30 chapters unless I absolutely must know what happens.

You know, it's so easy to take a trope and come up with a story because of how many examples and references are out there but you made this story so completely your own. There was humorous banter (which is the best sort of banter, really), lovable character dynamics (I personally loved Mira's relation with her grandparents, it was so wholesome), interesting yet realistic events (never read about plate shopping before but I loved it) and best of all, one of the best romantic buildups I've read on asianfanfics.

Although I would have definitely loved seeing more of them as a couple because they didn't last very long considering how things turned out around the time of their hs graduation, this is probably the first story that has kept me so hooked even though the concrete, physical displays of love were in much lesser number in comparison to the looks and subtle touches of love.

It's rare to find someone who can do that well, so I end up reading books that have the first kind of love but yeah, I loved the way you wrote this relationship. It was so new and I admire your writing style a lot.

To wrap up my incredibly long comment, I'll answer your question from the last chapter, my favourite character is Mira, just for the amount of sheer character development she shows. She is amazing and deserves everything in the world. (Plus come on, angry little gnome sounds like just the sort of friend I would love to have in my life.)
WholesomeRain
#3
Chapter 16: Agfeavajagsjsh! Even when rereading, this story makes me so fangirlish lol
noonimm
#4
Chapter 61: What I love the most in this story is at the end, they are doing what they really want, not because of the parent.

Beakhyun is always my favourite from the start till the end lol
cheonchoni
#5
Chapter 38: She is so deaddddd
JiLin1998 #6
Chapter 1: I‘m excited for the Next Chapters!!
Ohayoungy #7
Chapter 53: I'm crying
Ohayoungy #8
Chapter 38: I love them both ♡♥
Ohayoungy #9
Chapter 20: Cute
WholesomeRain
#10
Chapter 61: GAHAHAGAHAGAFSAFAHA:((((((( I’m so sad it’s over!! As for the questions in the authors note: Baekhyuns my favorite (he’s the cutest!) and I’m not sure what my favorite chapter is, might just need to reread and find out;) I loved this storyyyy!!!