A Vice

I'm Sorry It Was You
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“Ok,” Sehun stated simply, eyes fixed on my father. “I will take her to meet my family.” If possible I felt both relieved and afraid at same time. There was also a part of me that felt a little frustrated that my father's manipulation had worked on Sehun so easily.

A smile lifted my father’s withered lips. “Good. That’s what I hoped you would say.” Well, at least he wasn’t lying about that part. “I don’t want Mira to spend Christmas alone. Would you mind taking her to your family’s house for it?”

I’m pretty sure my jaw dropped. Surely my father wasn’t so naïve as to think that that was a normal arrangement to have. If my father hadn’t had an ulterior motive, there was no way he would be suggesting something like this - no normal father would be, anyway. I almost protested aloud when my eyes flicked to Sehun who was nervously chewing his lip. His eyes darted between the two of us as he gnawed away.

“That shouldn’t be a problem, right?” my father pressed, his voice suddenly becoming overpowering despite the level tone he kept. It was no wonder he was such a tyrant in the business world.

Sehun remained silent for a moment. Once again I wanted to speak up, saying that it was fine and that I didn’t mind spending Christmas alone. But once again, I didn’t. And I really wish I had. Shaking his head gently and with an almost reserved sigh, Sehun quietly replied, “No, sir. I’m sure my family would love to spend Christmas with her.”

“Good,” my father practically purred. “I think I was wrong about you – you are a good kid, after all.”

Sehun bowed his head but still looked worried by what he had just agreed to. “Thank you, sir.”

I wanted to curl up into a ball and hide; it was horrible. “Can you both leave?” I abruptly asked, startling everyone in the room including myself at my own rudeness. “Please, I’m very tired,” I added on, trying to lessen the shock of my brutish words.

Sehun nodded and got to his feet straight away. My father was a little slower, but he did get up although I suspected that he was less than impressed at being ordered around by me. At that particular moment though, I couldn't care less. I just wanted him to get out.

I stepped around the pair of them to the door which I then held open.  Again, I was probably being a little rude but I just wanted both of them to leave and separate. Sehun reached the door first, still looking a little concerned at what he had just been unknowingly tricked into. I saw him glancing over his shoulder at my father as if wondering what was the proper way to say goodbye to me in front of him.

Helping him out, I said, “I’ll see you on Monday.” Although tomorrow was Sunday I didn’t even want to see the mailman tomorrow, let alone anyone else. I just wanted a day to recover and get over what had just happened, but I didn’t know how easily this feeling would leave me.

Sehun nodded without complaint and stepped out of the doorframe. My father was about to follow him but I stuck my arm out and stopped him. “Hang on,” I told him, my tone a little harder than I had anticipated. There was no other way about it: I was angry. Sehun looked over his shoulder at us, probably expecting for my father to accompany him on the elevator on the way down. “Go ahead,” I told him, “I need to ask my father something.” And then, with a parting bow to my father, Sehun was gone.

As I closed the door over, I tried to think of the words to express how he had just made me feel. “Why did you do that?” was all I could come up with.

“Why? Isn’t it obvious? You were being too sloppy about it. The rate you were going at, I doubt you would have met them this year at all.”

“By why Christmas?” I pressed, a small whine escaping my lips. I cursed it for making me seem like a child throwing her toys out of the pram.

“Why not?” he challenged. “It’s a family gathering, if you’re there then they will think of you as family as well. This is exactly the angle we are aiming for" We couldn’t have planned this any better.” I wanted to tell him that not everyone thought like that - not by a long shot!

I let out a huff, perhaps a l

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saltymuffin
#1
Chapter 61: Just finished this story and i must say that i really love it❤️❤️thankyou dear❣️xoxo
MultiStanK
#2
Chapter 38: Came back to this chapter after just having finished this story a few minutes ago, because the writing in this chapter is probably my favourite. I've never read a story with such delicate yet detailed kisses before and the writing just amazes me to no end.



I personally think that the delicateness of the kisses and the touches they share sort of describes them in a way. It's like they tipoe amongst each other, especially in this chapter, but are starting to realise that their footsteps needn't be calculated or uncertain, they can be more confident and understood.

I don't know if that made any sense lol so swiftly moving on. I came over here from EXO Fanfic Gems (plus other fandom pearls) and I'm so glad I did. Korekrypta mentioned when they were describing this book that you took a cliche trope and made it your own and I honestly couldn't agree more.

The descriptions you had for every scene, the realistic 1st person POV, just everything was so well written and well executed that you got me to read the whole thing, which is rare because I usually avoid stories that have more than 30 chapters unless I absolutely must know what happens.

You know, it's so easy to take a trope and come up with a story because of how many examples and references are out there but you made this story so completely your own. There was humorous banter (which is the best sort of banter, really), lovable character dynamics (I personally loved Mira's relation with her grandparents, it was so wholesome), interesting yet realistic events (never read about plate shopping before but I loved it) and best of all, one of the best romantic buildups I've read on asianfanfics.

Although I would have definitely loved seeing more of them as a couple because they didn't last very long considering how things turned out around the time of their hs graduation, this is probably the first story that has kept me so hooked even though the concrete, physical displays of love were in much lesser number in comparison to the looks and subtle touches of love.

It's rare to find someone who can do that well, so I end up reading books that have the first kind of love but yeah, I loved the way you wrote this relationship. It was so new and I admire your writing style a lot.

To wrap up my incredibly long comment, I'll answer your question from the last chapter, my favourite character is Mira, just for the amount of sheer character development she shows. She is amazing and deserves everything in the world. (Plus come on, angry little gnome sounds like just the sort of friend I would love to have in my life.)
WholesomeRain
#3
Chapter 16: Agfeavajagsjsh! Even when rereading, this story makes me so fangirlish lol
noonimm
#4
Chapter 61: What I love the most in this story is at the end, they are doing what they really want, not because of the parent.

Beakhyun is always my favourite from the start till the end lol
cheonchoni
#5
Chapter 38: She is so deaddddd
JiLin1998 #6
Chapter 1: I‘m excited for the Next Chapters!!
Ohayoungy #7
Chapter 53: I'm crying
Ohayoungy #8
Chapter 38: I love them both ♡♥
Ohayoungy #9
Chapter 20: Cute
WholesomeRain
#10
Chapter 61: GAHAHAGAHAGAFSAFAHA:((((((( I’m so sad it’s over!! As for the questions in the authors note: Baekhyuns my favorite (he’s the cutest!) and I’m not sure what my favorite chapter is, might just need to reread and find out;) I loved this storyyyy!!!