Ally

I'm Sorry It Was You
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The next morning I found myself in an entirely new situation. Never in my life had I had a set uniform to wear, and this one was awful to say the least. The shirt was too big, the blazer to small and the skirt was too long; not that I minded the modesty, but it was surely going to make me stand out.  In order for this to work, I was not living in my normal house whilst attending this school. My father had bought a nearby penthouse on the condition, of course, that no one saw me going there. I had to pretend to be just an ordinary student, not the only daughter and heir to my father’s fortune.

Sighing, I got out of the car and was instantly met with stares. Looking down at myself, I thought I looked pretty normal; same uniform as everyone else, same rashly done hairstyle, same everything.

I internally shrugged, bided a begrudging farewell to my driver for the next few months and headed towards the shoddy looking building. This was going to be hell.

The first and foremost thing on my mind was to find Oh Sehun in the sea of students. He should have been quite obvious given his striking looks. I searched the faces in vain: everyone looked the same in this ugly uniform! 

As I walked along I became very self-conscious. Not that I was super-confident normally, but it was hard when people were pointing and whispering about you constantly. I was clearly going to be today’s Star Attraction. Great.

Heading to my first class without any success finding Oh Sehun, I was in a really foul mood and missing my old school immensely. My mood wasn’t improved any when I was made to stand in front of the class and introduce myself. After stuttering over my own name, I was told to take a seat near the back next to a boy and another empty seat.

I wordlessly sat, avoiding the boy’s gaze. The boy didn't seem to want to let it go though, and continued to stare. I peeked at him and saw he was looking confusedly down at me. He rested his head on his folded arms and asked, "How’s your head?"

Startled, I clutched my head to feel if there was anything on it from the accident yesterday. When he saw me do this he chuckled quietly so our teacher couldn’t hear. I looked at him, at his brown eyes. They seemed oddly familiar. He was...the boy from yesterday. The one who ran in front of our car.  "It’s fine," I bluntly replied, turning back towards the blackboard. 

"My arms kinda sore," the boy mumbled, rubbing his arm in mock pain.

"I didn’t ask," I curtly replied, not caring to make friends.

He peeked at me again. "Why did you turn up in that car this morning?" he asked me quietly.

I furiously turned my head towards him; what on earth did he mean? "It's not the same car."

He shook his head, "I know that, but why the fancy cars if you come to a school like this?"

I froze. That's why I was being stared at so much today. It was because I had arrived in my usual car. "It was...my friend's car. Their parents knew how nervous I was about coming here so offered me a lift on my first day."

He leaned closer to me, "And last night?" Damn. I'd forgotten that he had seen me then too.

"Same thing," I rashly replied, firmly turning away from him and facing the teacher completely. I wasn't here to make friends, I was here to find Oh Sehun and become close to his family, specifically his father.

When the lesson was over I quickly pushed out my chair and made a break for outside. I was blocked by the boy who had been sitting next to me.

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saltymuffin
#1
Chapter 61: Just finished this story and i must say that i really love it❤️❤️thankyou dear❣️xoxo
MultiStanK
#2
Chapter 38: Came back to this chapter after just having finished this story a few minutes ago, because the writing in this chapter is probably my favourite. I've never read a story with such delicate yet detailed kisses before and the writing just amazes me to no end.



I personally think that the delicateness of the kisses and the touches they share sort of describes them in a way. It's like they tipoe amongst each other, especially in this chapter, but are starting to realise that their footsteps needn't be calculated or uncertain, they can be more confident and understood.

I don't know if that made any sense lol so swiftly moving on. I came over here from EXO Fanfic Gems (plus other fandom pearls) and I'm so glad I did. Korekrypta mentioned when they were describing this book that you took a cliche trope and made it your own and I honestly couldn't agree more.

The descriptions you had for every scene, the realistic 1st person POV, just everything was so well written and well executed that you got me to read the whole thing, which is rare because I usually avoid stories that have more than 30 chapters unless I absolutely must know what happens.

You know, it's so easy to take a trope and come up with a story because of how many examples and references are out there but you made this story so completely your own. There was humorous banter (which is the best sort of banter, really), lovable character dynamics (I personally loved Mira's relation with her grandparents, it was so wholesome), interesting yet realistic events (never read about plate shopping before but I loved it) and best of all, one of the best romantic buildups I've read on asianfanfics.

Although I would have definitely loved seeing more of them as a couple because they didn't last very long considering how things turned out around the time of their hs graduation, this is probably the first story that has kept me so hooked even though the concrete, physical displays of love were in much lesser number in comparison to the looks and subtle touches of love.

It's rare to find someone who can do that well, so I end up reading books that have the first kind of love but yeah, I loved the way you wrote this relationship. It was so new and I admire your writing style a lot.

To wrap up my incredibly long comment, I'll answer your question from the last chapter, my favourite character is Mira, just for the amount of sheer character development she shows. She is amazing and deserves everything in the world. (Plus come on, angry little gnome sounds like just the sort of friend I would love to have in my life.)
WholesomeRain
#3
Chapter 16: Agfeavajagsjsh! Even when rereading, this story makes me so fangirlish lol
noonimm
#4
Chapter 61: What I love the most in this story is at the end, they are doing what they really want, not because of the parent.

Beakhyun is always my favourite from the start till the end lol
cheonchoni
#5
Chapter 38: She is so deaddddd
JiLin1998 #6
Chapter 1: I‘m excited for the Next Chapters!!
Ohayoungy #7
Chapter 53: I'm crying
Ohayoungy #8
Chapter 38: I love them both ♡♥
Ohayoungy #9
Chapter 20: Cute
WholesomeRain
#10
Chapter 61: GAHAHAGAHAGAFSAFAHA:((((((( I’m so sad it’s over!! As for the questions in the authors note: Baekhyuns my favorite (he’s the cutest!) and I’m not sure what my favorite chapter is, might just need to reread and find out;) I loved this storyyyy!!!