Luhan

I'm Sorry It Was You
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Finding clothes to wear was a bother. It wasn’t like I was usually the most fashion-savvy person on the street, but I didn’t think I could just turn up to meet my friend wearing just anything. To say the least, my attempt at finding an outfit was futile. I had no clothes here that were up to the job of impressing anyone. In the end I just put on a pair of jogging trousers (unused) and a hoody. I would just go with the jogger look to avoid explaining my shabby clothes. A double life is a hard thing to lead.

When I approached the park, guided by the just-lit streetlights, I kept my eyes peeled for the familiar face. As I was looking around, it occurred to me that perhaps I should at least make it seem like I was jogging. Half-heartedly breaking into a walk-jog thing, I continued to search for him. His face should make him so obvious to spot, and yet I couldn’t see him anywhere.

“Mira!” a voice called from behind me, causing me to stop and peek over my shoulder.

As soon as I saw his face, I smiled. He was just as adorable as always, a cute smile playing across his full lips as he pulled his jacket around himself and jogged over to me. He was wearing a thick woolly hat that I had given him for Christmas the previous year. It had been an ongoing joke that I knitted it myself.

“Luhan!” I beamed, bracing myself as he threw his arms around my neck and hugged me tightly. It felt a little awkward, but I had really missed him “How are you?” I managed to squeak out.

He let go of me, holding my shoulders at arm’s length. “I’m fine.” He suddenly seemed to notice my attire, “Since when do you jog?”

I internally cringed at my outfit choice. “It’s sort of a trial thing.”

 

Being around Luhan was nice. It was almost like being back at my old school, just without the rest of the bother. It must have sounded funny to anyone who listened to us talking because we would mostly talk in Chinese but occasionally when a word slipped my mind or sometimes unintentionally I would say it in Korean or English. Luhan would always complement this by switching to whatever language I had changed to. We had a good friendship like that.

Luhan filled me in on all that had happened since I was gone. There was a multitude of rumours going around about me; some that I’d secretly been married off to an Indian prince, some that I’d moved to Africa to join a native tribe, and some that I’d died in a horrible accident and no one was confirming anything because of how it would affect the stock market.

“I think I like the African tribe one best,” I laughed.

He nodded, “I know, they’re all so funny. People keep coming up to me and asking if you’re ok and I just stare at them with a sort of sad expression and walk away. It’s hilarious! You should honestly see their faces.”

I gently slapped his arm as we walked, “Yah! You shouldn’t encourage them.”

Playfully shrugging, he replied, “Have to amuse myself somehow.” It occurred to me that he might have a point. 

Up ahead of us was a little street food stall. My stomach rumbled instantly. Grabbing his arm, I dragged him towards it.

“What are you doing?” he asked, clearly surprised by my impulsion.

“Trust me! It’s amazing.”

He still looked utterly confused. I raised an eyebrow at him, “You’ve never had street food before, have you?”

“Street food?” the words came out of his mouth like he had never spoken them before and this was his first time trying them out.

Nodding, I joined the queue of people and motioned for him to do the same.

When Luhan caught sight of what I was proposing we ate his face fell a little. “Uhm, Mira… Are you sure that this is edible?”

In this situation, I couldn’t help but imagine what Sehun would have said to that if he were here. Some stupid, snarky blonde kid response, no doubt. “Yes! It’s totally edible and totally delicious.”

Luhan leaned a little closer to me. “But is it hygienic?” he whispered, seemingly forgetting that he was speaking in Chinese so there was a very low probability that anyone would be able to understand him anyway.

It was our turn to order then. Ignoring Luhan’s worried expression, I ordered a little of everything. We sat on a bench nearby and I tucked in. Luhan, naturally, was more hesitant as he s

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saltymuffin
#1
Chapter 61: Just finished this story and i must say that i really love it❤️❤️thankyou dear❣️xoxo
MultiStanK
#2
Chapter 38: Came back to this chapter after just having finished this story a few minutes ago, because the writing in this chapter is probably my favourite. I've never read a story with such delicate yet detailed kisses before and the writing just amazes me to no end.



I personally think that the delicateness of the kisses and the touches they share sort of describes them in a way. It's like they tipoe amongst each other, especially in this chapter, but are starting to realise that their footsteps needn't be calculated or uncertain, they can be more confident and understood.

I don't know if that made any sense lol so swiftly moving on. I came over here from EXO Fanfic Gems (plus other fandom pearls) and I'm so glad I did. Korekrypta mentioned when they were describing this book that you took a cliche trope and made it your own and I honestly couldn't agree more.

The descriptions you had for every scene, the realistic 1st person POV, just everything was so well written and well executed that you got me to read the whole thing, which is rare because I usually avoid stories that have more than 30 chapters unless I absolutely must know what happens.

You know, it's so easy to take a trope and come up with a story because of how many examples and references are out there but you made this story so completely your own. There was humorous banter (which is the best sort of banter, really), lovable character dynamics (I personally loved Mira's relation with her grandparents, it was so wholesome), interesting yet realistic events (never read about plate shopping before but I loved it) and best of all, one of the best romantic buildups I've read on asianfanfics.

Although I would have definitely loved seeing more of them as a couple because they didn't last very long considering how things turned out around the time of their hs graduation, this is probably the first story that has kept me so hooked even though the concrete, physical displays of love were in much lesser number in comparison to the looks and subtle touches of love.

It's rare to find someone who can do that well, so I end up reading books that have the first kind of love but yeah, I loved the way you wrote this relationship. It was so new and I admire your writing style a lot.

To wrap up my incredibly long comment, I'll answer your question from the last chapter, my favourite character is Mira, just for the amount of sheer character development she shows. She is amazing and deserves everything in the world. (Plus come on, angry little gnome sounds like just the sort of friend I would love to have in my life.)
WholesomeRain
#3
Chapter 16: Agfeavajagsjsh! Even when rereading, this story makes me so fangirlish lol
noonimm
#4
Chapter 61: What I love the most in this story is at the end, they are doing what they really want, not because of the parent.

Beakhyun is always my favourite from the start till the end lol
cheonchoni
#5
Chapter 38: She is so deaddddd
JiLin1998 #6
Chapter 1: I‘m excited for the Next Chapters!!
Ohayoungy #7
Chapter 53: I'm crying
Ohayoungy #8
Chapter 38: I love them both ♡♥
Ohayoungy #9
Chapter 20: Cute
WholesomeRain
#10
Chapter 61: GAHAHAGAHAGAFSAFAHA:((((((( I’m so sad it’s over!! As for the questions in the authors note: Baekhyuns my favorite (he’s the cutest!) and I’m not sure what my favorite chapter is, might just need to reread and find out;) I loved this storyyyy!!!