Heartbeat

I'm Sorry It Was You
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Instinctively reaching up to his face, Sehun placed his hand over the large scratch that stretched down his left cheek.

“I forgot about that,” he admitted a little sheepishly.

Getting to my feet quickly, I wanted to get a closer look at it. “What happened?”

Shaking his head, he replied simply, “I got scratched on the subway because it was so busy.”

That was why I had never ridden the subway before; and it was obviously a wise decision. Taking a step closer to him, I could see only parts of the scratch through his fingers – it looked deep. “Have you cleaned it?”

Shaking his head, he let out a little sigh, “Not yet.”

I was about to offer to do it but I stopped for two reasons: one, I had never actually cleaned a wound (and certainly not one this large) before; and two, I thought that the closeness it brought would make both of us highly uncomfortable. “You should do it now.” I turned to leave, my hunger forgotten briefly.

“I thought you wanted food?”

My ear perked up at the word, and I turned, eying his cheek warily. He had dropped his hand again, but had turned a little so it wasn’t directly in my sight. “I think you should rest.”

He shrugged, “Whatever. I’m making pizza if you change your mind.”

“Pizza?” My mouth was salivating already.

Nodding, he held open his door for me, already knowing that I was about to come in. Without needing any more coaxing, I scuttled in under his arm like a hungry stray dog. I was surprised he didn’t make any comment about it.

 

Leading me through to his kitchen, I looked around me as I went. Although this was not my first time in his house, it was the first chance I had to look around the place properly. My flustered and disorientated state last time didn’t really make for an ideal house-snooping mindset. 

The place was nice. It was mostly creamy white, with all the cabinets in the kitchen made of black marble. I let out a little whistle; that wouldn’t have been cheap.

Sehun smirked at me, “Like it?”

I nodded, “Yeah, it’s nice. Not like I thought you’d have it…”  Hearing a scoffing noise, I guessed that he didn’t like my comment about his taste.

When he reached the centre of the kitchen, he turned me to a questioning expression, “Why can’t you cook?”

Shrugging, I honestly replied, “I just never learned.”

Sehun’s questioning expression remained plastered to his features, “But you live alone, how can you not cook?”

He had a point. For someone who was living alone, the ability to cook seemed like a basic essential skill to have. “I only started living on my own recently.” It wasn’t a lie. “Before that, my father used to cook for me.” That was more like an extension of the truth: my father’s chef’s cooked for me.

“Then why don’t you live with your father now?” Sehun asked as he opened his fridge and started taking out various ingredients.

Hmm, why didn’t I live with my father now? It was a good question, I’ll give him that. And certainly one I had not prepared myself for, since I hadn’t planned on letting anyone know where I lived.

“He’s abroad - he’s working abroad. So he thought I should stay here and finish my studies.”

“Why did you move schools then?”

“I was home-schooled before,” I began, making it up as I went along, “but when my father received a job offer, he didn’t want me to only see the tutor so he enrolled me into mainstream school.” Even I was impressed with that one.

Sehun nodded as he began kneading the dough. I had seen this once before when I was in Italy, but there was something amazing about watching him do it.

“Ugh!” He suddenly cried out, causing me to look away from his working hands and up to his face.

“What is it?” I asked, a small frown forming between my eyebrows.

Shaking his head, he grabbed a rolling pin, “No, it’s just you’re really pretty creepy when you stare like that.”

Me? I was creepy? What about him? I puffed the air out of my cheeks as they reddened a little, an endless stream of curses running through my mind as I glowered at him.

“Here.” He stepped to the side of the board he was working on.

I snapped out of my silent cursing and softened my expression to him as I was curious about what he meant.

“Here!” he said again, rubbing his nose with the side of his sleeve.

Taking a step towards him, I still didn’t know what exactly it was that he wanted me to do.

“Roll it.”

“What it?” This boy could really talk rubbish.

“Roll. It.”

I raised an eyebrow at his condescending tone but walked up to the dough to his left all the same. Picking up the rolling pin, I asked, “With this?” Although I had just seen him using it, I didn’t want to make a fool of myself by using the wrong thing.

His lips formed a straight line as he looked at me. I got the impression that he was seriously doubting if my outstanding grades were all my own work.

Rolling my eyes, I tossed the rolling ping from hand to hand; it was heavier than I thought it would be. I then proceeded to roll it around in the dough. Before long, the dough got stuck to the rolling pin and I was in a gloopy mess – again.

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saltymuffin
#1
Chapter 61: Just finished this story and i must say that i really love it❤️❤️thankyou dear❣️xoxo
MultiStanK
#2
Chapter 38: Came back to this chapter after just having finished this story a few minutes ago, because the writing in this chapter is probably my favourite. I've never read a story with such delicate yet detailed kisses before and the writing just amazes me to no end.



I personally think that the delicateness of the kisses and the touches they share sort of describes them in a way. It's like they tipoe amongst each other, especially in this chapter, but are starting to realise that their footsteps needn't be calculated or uncertain, they can be more confident and understood.

I don't know if that made any sense lol so swiftly moving on. I came over here from EXO Fanfic Gems (plus other fandom pearls) and I'm so glad I did. Korekrypta mentioned when they were describing this book that you took a cliche trope and made it your own and I honestly couldn't agree more.

The descriptions you had for every scene, the realistic 1st person POV, just everything was so well written and well executed that you got me to read the whole thing, which is rare because I usually avoid stories that have more than 30 chapters unless I absolutely must know what happens.

You know, it's so easy to take a trope and come up with a story because of how many examples and references are out there but you made this story so completely your own. There was humorous banter (which is the best sort of banter, really), lovable character dynamics (I personally loved Mira's relation with her grandparents, it was so wholesome), interesting yet realistic events (never read about plate shopping before but I loved it) and best of all, one of the best romantic buildups I've read on asianfanfics.

Although I would have definitely loved seeing more of them as a couple because they didn't last very long considering how things turned out around the time of their hs graduation, this is probably the first story that has kept me so hooked even though the concrete, physical displays of love were in much lesser number in comparison to the looks and subtle touches of love.

It's rare to find someone who can do that well, so I end up reading books that have the first kind of love but yeah, I loved the way you wrote this relationship. It was so new and I admire your writing style a lot.

To wrap up my incredibly long comment, I'll answer your question from the last chapter, my favourite character is Mira, just for the amount of sheer character development she shows. She is amazing and deserves everything in the world. (Plus come on, angry little gnome sounds like just the sort of friend I would love to have in my life.)
WholesomeRain
#3
Chapter 16: Agfeavajagsjsh! Even when rereading, this story makes me so fangirlish lol
noonimm
#4
Chapter 61: What I love the most in this story is at the end, they are doing what they really want, not because of the parent.

Beakhyun is always my favourite from the start till the end lol
cheonchoni
#5
Chapter 38: She is so deaddddd
JiLin1998 #6
Chapter 1: I‘m excited for the Next Chapters!!
Ohayoungy #7
Chapter 53: I'm crying
Ohayoungy #8
Chapter 38: I love them both ♡♥
Ohayoungy #9
Chapter 20: Cute
WholesomeRain
#10
Chapter 61: GAHAHAGAHAGAFSAFAHA:((((((( I’m so sad it’s over!! As for the questions in the authors note: Baekhyuns my favorite (he’s the cutest!) and I’m not sure what my favorite chapter is, might just need to reread and find out;) I loved this storyyyy!!!