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I just wanted to disappear. The figure I had collided with bent down a little so they were at eye level with me. “Hey, are you ok?" There was something about the voice, it was...familiar. The person suddenly seemed to recognise who I was, “M-Mira?!”

I began shaking, with relief this time, when I peered up through my tear-filled eyes and recognised his face. “Se...hun...” I sobbed.

He looked over me before swallowing hard. “Shh!” he soothed me, “It’s ok, I’m here now.” My sobs continued and he sat down on the ground facing me, staring at my face intently.

I sat back onto my knees and covered my face with my hands, continuing to shake as violent sobs ripped through me. It felt like a relief to have him here. But still, what had actually just happened to me? It was like blur in my mind.

“What happened?” he asked quietly, seemingly hearing my thoughts. “Your head is bleeding." He stretched out a hand to check it, but I flinched away violently before he could, another sob escaping my body.

I couldn’t see his face through my tears, but I imagined it was concerned. When he spoke again, his voice was a lot darker, “Mira, what happened?”

Without saying a word, I glanced over my shoulder and just caught a glimpse of my attacker staggering his way into the distance. I shuddered violently when I saw him. Sehun followed my gaze, his eyes narrowing in on the man instantly and darkening. He didn’t ask for any further clarification after that. Standing up, he made to step around me, in the direction of the man. I didn’t even need to have a good imagination to guess what he was planning. I couldn’t be on my own though. "Don’t leave me…" I whimpered while trying to wipe away the tears that wouldn't stop. The idea of being alone now was not one I was handling well.

Sehun stopped walking as soon as I said this. Although I wasn’t looking at him, I knew he was staring at my convulsing back. Without even a second consideration, he was back beside me, bent down in front of me where I could clearly see his outline. “Don’t worry. I’m here, Mira.” The way he whispered my name was like someone had thrown me a lifeline after I had fallen into an icy sea. He began pulling the lifeline back to safety, “You're safe with me. I promise I won’t leave you alone."

Suddenly a heavy object was on my head, although a little startled by the motion, I was calmed instantly when I realised it was Sehun's hand. Sehun gently the top my head with his thumb as if I was a lost puppy; I guess he wasn’t completely wrong.

"Come on," he began, winding his hand into mine slowly and gently and rhythmically squeezing it. He got to his feet with slow and precise movements - probably not wanting to startle me. Stretching down once he was up, he clasped my other hand, helping me to get onto my shaking feet. "I’ll take you home."

Our hands stayed together, but I wasn’t sure which one of us it was that didn’t want to let go more. Despite his hand’s comfort, my legs still could not function as they should have and as a result I shook a little where I stood.

Before I could even do something to stop it, I began to collapse. The ground looked hard and I knew I was soft - this was going to be very painful. My fall was broken, however, by Sehun’s back which had managed to scoop under me. I tried to stand again but he squeezed my hand tightly. "Why do you have to be so stubborn? Just accept the help," he said quietly.

At this point, I was far too exhausted both mentally and physically to argue, so I let my head rest on his back. I could feel the contours of his muscles and bones as he repositioned himself and then hoisted me up until he was giving me a piggyback. It was so comfy and safe up there that I couldn’t bring myself to protest. He began to walk, his blonde hair tottered along in front of me in the most soothing motion. “It must be nice being this tall...” I yawned, suddenly sleepy from the movement. I heard him chuckle at me, stupid blonde kid that he was. It wasn’t long before I couldn’t fight the soothing, swaying motion of his steps or my own exh

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saltymuffin
#1
Chapter 61: Just finished this story and i must say that i really love it❤️❤️thankyou dear❣️xoxo
MultiStanK
#2
Chapter 38: Came back to this chapter after just having finished this story a few minutes ago, because the writing in this chapter is probably my favourite. I've never read a story with such delicate yet detailed kisses before and the writing just amazes me to no end.



I personally think that the delicateness of the kisses and the touches they share sort of describes them in a way. It's like they tipoe amongst each other, especially in this chapter, but are starting to realise that their footsteps needn't be calculated or uncertain, they can be more confident and understood.

I don't know if that made any sense lol so swiftly moving on. I came over here from EXO Fanfic Gems (plus other fandom pearls) and I'm so glad I did. Korekrypta mentioned when they were describing this book that you took a cliche trope and made it your own and I honestly couldn't agree more.

The descriptions you had for every scene, the realistic 1st person POV, just everything was so well written and well executed that you got me to read the whole thing, which is rare because I usually avoid stories that have more than 30 chapters unless I absolutely must know what happens.

You know, it's so easy to take a trope and come up with a story because of how many examples and references are out there but you made this story so completely your own. There was humorous banter (which is the best sort of banter, really), lovable character dynamics (I personally loved Mira's relation with her grandparents, it was so wholesome), interesting yet realistic events (never read about plate shopping before but I loved it) and best of all, one of the best romantic buildups I've read on asianfanfics.

Although I would have definitely loved seeing more of them as a couple because they didn't last very long considering how things turned out around the time of their hs graduation, this is probably the first story that has kept me so hooked even though the concrete, physical displays of love were in much lesser number in comparison to the looks and subtle touches of love.

It's rare to find someone who can do that well, so I end up reading books that have the first kind of love but yeah, I loved the way you wrote this relationship. It was so new and I admire your writing style a lot.

To wrap up my incredibly long comment, I'll answer your question from the last chapter, my favourite character is Mira, just for the amount of sheer character development she shows. She is amazing and deserves everything in the world. (Plus come on, angry little gnome sounds like just the sort of friend I would love to have in my life.)
WholesomeRain
#3
Chapter 16: Agfeavajagsjsh! Even when rereading, this story makes me so fangirlish lol
noonimm
#4
Chapter 61: What I love the most in this story is at the end, they are doing what they really want, not because of the parent.

Beakhyun is always my favourite from the start till the end lol
cheonchoni
#5
Chapter 38: She is so deaddddd
JiLin1998 #6
Chapter 1: I‘m excited for the Next Chapters!!
Ohayoungy #7
Chapter 53: I'm crying
Ohayoungy #8
Chapter 38: I love them both ♡♥
Ohayoungy #9
Chapter 20: Cute
WholesomeRain
#10
Chapter 61: GAHAHAGAHAGAFSAFAHA:((((((( I’m so sad it’s over!! As for the questions in the authors note: Baekhyuns my favorite (he’s the cutest!) and I’m not sure what my favorite chapter is, might just need to reread and find out;) I loved this storyyyy!!!