three's a crowd

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have my 1000 word drabble again

my attempt at scifi?/apocalyptic?/postapocalyptic?/dystopia? (i have no idea what genre this is)

(and i wonder why i always have trouble hitting 1000 words for assignments)

(okay but actually this took me close to a day & i should be studying)

 

They were the last, he’d often hear people say. He couldn’t decide if it was a good thing because after all, he had witnessed his glorious country crumbled under his very own eyes. He stood in the middle of his street and remembered how full of life it was just days before, but it was now covered with ash and smoke. He received a letter some weeks later. He uttered a silent farewell before both brothers got whisked off into the pilot program.

The hangar reeked of petroleum and sweat. He slung his duffel bag over his shoulder and marveled at the giant aircrafts, feeling so tiny and insignificant suddenly. The people hurried along, shouting orders in the near distance. His brother gave him an affirming pat in the back and the look in his eyes told Woohyun that they will see each other again. He looked back for a last time as he got ushered into his bunk.

The guys in his bunk were all 90s kids, the youngest a 99-liner who still had baby fats clung to his cheeks. He made his way quietly to his bed, averting eyes to avoid being rude. His bed was at the far end of the bunker and he already decided to keep his eyes to himself, but when he reached his bed, he took a second look. She stood there in her navy coverall and her hair held in a tight ponytail, leaning against his bed frame with her arms crossed. Her face was taut and her eyes burned with an intensity Woohyun had never seen before.

“I’m gonna cut down on the pleasantries since we’re of the same age,” she said after taking a quick glance at his tag. “Hi, I’m your partner.”

“Hi, my name’s Nam Woohyun.”

He didn’t expect it, but she gave him a smile and extended her hand. Woohyun gladly took it.

They’d make a great team definitely.

 

 

They sat together during dinner, and one of the bunkmates nudged him in his chest.

“You’re lucky you get a girl,” he chattered on, “I’m stuck here with this boring guy.” He made a face at his buddy who continued to wordlessly stare blankly ahead. He casually hung his hand off the boy’s shoulder. “By the way, I’m Sungyeol and he’s Myungsoo.” He chirped, then leaned in to whisper quietly. “But I heard they’ll be taking our names tonight.”

Their meal got disrupted when their commander came in. He was everything that Woohyun had not imagined – young, fair and sickly. However, when he cleared his throat to speak, everyone was silent.

“Good evening, gentlemen!” he shouted, his voice loud and clear as

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byeollie
#1
Chapter 58: that sentence at the very end though. </3
N_Faye_O
#2
Chapter 52: Where's your alma mater? If you're from Singapore we have a few schools combining soon..
watermelon
#3
Chapter 52: One shot catching up with your updates and it leaves my heart with a weird tingling feeling ㅠㅠ
I'm starting to see something common amongst your works but it's something I can't point out in words.
It's beautiful.
watermelon
#4
Chapter 48: I don't know why but I found myself tearing up at the end of the chapter. This is beautiful. Really, really beautiful ㅠㅠ
How is it that I can feel this so vividly (':
byeollie
#5
Chapter 45: can't you compile all these drabbles and one shots and send to publisher so i could get a hardcopy to keep for myself??? i'm so into these chapters i missed and even proceed to read from the 1st chapter through the dawn and and the feels. And i could feel that you're maturing as the chapters progress! the emotions you rendered through your words though ;;;
watermelon
#6
Chapter 42: The train scene came alive and I felt a pang in my heart </3 Didn't thought it'd be a dream and it's so cool TT
If they actually dreamt of each other and remembers and meet in reality *inserts heart eyes emoji*
watermelon
#7
Chapter 40: /rolls in/
This reminded me of a movie hmmm, was it maze runner or divergent setting (I can't rmb) XD
This deserves to be a full-length chaptered fic man TT
The ending got me like T-T</3 your ship is back again haha.
Myungyeol is so ADORBS here like awwww TT
Okays, I'm off to dreamland (':
/rolls out/
watermelon
#8
Chapter 39: Awwwww~ ^^ This made me smile a lot (':
The characters' movements and expressions came alive right before me as I read <3 I swear you've a gift in writing seriously *-*
고마워요 for this 1000-word Drabble, I was barely lifting my head in my piles of book, too. T-T
Tbh, I actually secretly pictured the girl as the future you :p
You always get me excited whenever I get a 'new story updates' notification :D
ps. Stop getting distracted (; /rolls out/
byeollie
#9
Chapter 39: It's been a very long while and I just had to be welcomed with awesome stories and the latest one just got me squeal in delight because DANGGGGG I FREAKING LOVE COLDPLAYYYYY.
N_Faye_O
#10
Chapter 39: 27!!! *does a littlw Sunggyu jiggle* xD

Sorry I just had to xD