♦ Snowflakes (C)
♦​ gonexx

Genre: Angst | Fluff |  
Main Characters: Sehun | Xiumin 

Today was the last day of winter.
The last day of snow,
The last day of the cold winter air.
And, It was also the last day for them.
"You're stupid, you know that?"

Title: 4/5 

The title is really common but it really suits the story. 

 

Poster and Background: 0/10

No poster and background equals no score.

I suggest that you get one since posters and backgrounds sets your readers into a mood. Posters catch the attention of readers. If your background is dark then the readers will feel the seriousness of the story.

They play an important part too. 

Here are some shops that I highly recommend:

♦ IceCream Graphics 

♦ Chocolat Poster Shop

♦ Dark Heart Graphics

 

Description and Foreword: 9.5/10

I love your description! At first it was a bit hard for my eyes to adjust to the brightness but it's cool. I suggest toning it down a bit though.

 

Plot: 34/35 

I don't really read fantasy stories so the plot is kind of new for me... But the part where one lover leaves the other isn't. 

 

Flow: 6/10.

I can't help but feel that you rushed things... I wish you made more moments of them to let the readers feel their relationship... or maybe I just don't feel it because I'm not a fan of Semin? xD 

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