Karehana story link | Author link   Review by: Iamanexofan   Title: 4.5 over 5

Your title is very unique and is very related to the story. I suppose it's eye-catching for some people but I wouldn't have read it if you didn't request xD That's just me though. 


Poster & Background: 6.5 over 10 

I love your background! It's so pretty! ^^ Especially since it's HQ hahaha but it doesn't give of the angst vibe. 

I think that your poster could be better though.  It screams drama and romance but not angst and action. I just don't feel it I guess... 

If you're planning on changing it, here are some shops that I highly recommend. (Click on the diamonds to be directed to the link.)  

♦ IceCream Graphics

♦ Chocolat Poster Shop

♦ Dark Heart Graphics


Description & Foreword: 8.5 over 10

Your description is so pretty but I just don't get it... It's good to keep your readers interested by not providing too much details but in your case, you didn't provide enough information.  


Plot: 33 over 35

I was really shocked when I read your story... I thought that she'd side with them or something... you know the typical loyal daughter who wouldn't betray her parents. I was wrong though xD and I would have never pegged Chen, the CHEN, to be an assassin. I now understand how he could have a whole chicken leg xDD 

You should have warned about slight and stuf