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Hope, faith and wait
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Review by: Iamanexofan
Title: 5 over 5
I really, really love your title! It's unique, eye catching and connected to the story! :D
Do you know that I smile every time I read it? It's just so cute hahaha
Poster & Background: 8 over 10
Your poster screams angst, romance and drama :D It's a good poster.
The title is readable and the characters are recognizable. I just don't like the kissing scene above Luhan's head. It kind of ruined the poster for me, especially since it's blurred.
I love your background! The font is so pretty ~
Description & Foreword: 2 over 10
The font is consistent and readable. I have no complains about that.
Your description is waaaay too long and it provided too much information. You should make a new one that's short and eye catching and your description can be your foreword.
I was very confused when I read it. What do you mean by September - Autumn? Were you indicating that it was September and that it was autumn?
Then it would look better if it would be separated from the rest of the paragraph.
September; Autumn
And then the rest of the paragraph.
To be honest, the first paragraph made no sense to me... so I revised it based on my understanding.
3 years had passed and they yearn for time to stop. To ask Tao, who had the power to control time, to do so. But his powers isn't even real and they were left with no choice but to enjoy their success.
How you jumped from them celebrating and being introduced was too sudden. You didn't even mention EXO in the first paragraph. To introduce them like that is confusing.
It's like... where did that come from?
I think it will also look better if you do the list of members like this:
EXO-K members:
• Kim Joonmyeon (Suho) - Main leader
• Byun Baekhyun
• Park Chanyeol
• Do Kyungsoo (D.O)
• Kim Jongin (Kai)
• Oh Sehun
EXO-M members:
• Wu Yifan (Kris) - Chinese leader
• Kim Minseok (Xiumin)
• Xi Luhan
• Kim Jongdae (Chen)
• Zhang Yixing (Lay)
• Huang Zitao
This way, it looks neater and more organized.
Your last p
I really, really love your title! It's unique, eye catching and connected to the story! :D
Do you know that I smile every time I read it? It's just so cute hahaha
Poster & Background: 8 over 10
Your poster screams angst, romance and drama :D It's a good poster.
The title is readable and the characters are recognizable. I just don't like the kissing scene above Luhan's head. It kind of ruined the poster for me, especially since it's blurred.
I love your background! The font is so pretty ~
Description & Foreword: 2 over 10
The font is consistent and readable. I have no complains about that.
Your description is waaaay too long and it provided too much information. You should make a new one that's short and eye catching and your description can be your foreword.
I was very confused when I read it. What do you mean by September - Autumn? Were you indicating that it was September and that it was autumn?
Then it would look better if it would be separated from the rest of the paragraph.
September; Autumn
And then the rest of the paragraph.
To be honest, the first paragraph made no sense to me... so I revised it based on my understanding.
3 years had passed and they yearn for time to stop. To ask Tao, who had the power to control time, to do so. But his powers isn't even real and they were left with no choice but to enjoy their success.
How you jumped from them celebrating and being introduced was too sudden. You didn't even mention EXO in the first paragraph. To introduce them like that is confusing.
It's like... where did that come from?
I think it will also look better if you do the list of members like this:
EXO-K members:
• Kim Joonmyeon (Suho) - Main leader
• Byun Baekhyun
• Park Chanyeol
• Do Kyungsoo (D.O)
• Kim Jongin (Kai)
• Oh Sehun
EXO-M members:
• Wu Yifan (Kris) - Chinese leader
• Kim Minseok (Xiumin)
• Xi Luhan
• Kim Jongdae (Chen)
• Zhang Yixing (Lay)
• Huang Zitao
This way, it looks neater and more organized.
Your last p
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