The last breath story link | Author link   review by: iamanexofan   Title: 4.5 over 5

Your title isn't really that unique but it's connected to the story and it seems eye-catching enough. 



Poster & Background: 7 over 10 

I love your poster! It screams romance and drama and it looks very realistic! It's so fitting ~ I'm loving whoever made it! :D 

He or she made your story look more attractive! ^^

I took off points because you didn't have a background. Having a poster is good and having a good poster is great but having a good background is perfect.

You should request a background too! ^^ You could request in the same shop so the designs would match but you could also request in another shop. It's up to you ^^ 



Description & Foreword: 7.5 over 10

To be honest, your description confused me. I didn't understand what would happen and what did happen when I read it. All I could get from it was that she takes a break and meets someone who makes her remember a past lover who died. (I'm not sure xD) 

I was especially confused when I read the part about the uneven boy. What did you mean by that? Like... wishy washy is that what you meant? 

I really liked the placement though and the font that you used could be easily read. I have no complains about the font color either since black seems fitting enough. 

Let me just suggest some things concerning your description: (This is just a suggestion. Don't feel pressured into using it! ^^) 


This is an exact replica of your description: 

Jang Nara, a hallyu idol who