® — Your Average Love Guru

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love gUru  story link | Author Link   Review by: IAmAnexofan   Title: 5 over 5

I love your title! It's very unique and catchy! :D To be honest, when you requested, I wanted to review your story. xD

It just seems so interesting and even if the title is sort of long, it perfectly fits the story! :D Just from the title, I knew that I would read a romantic-comedy ~

I love it so five points for you ~ :D


Poster & Background: 8 over 10 

Your poster is so cuteeee! It screams romance (because Kai had his arm around D.O) and comedy! The title can be read clearly but I think the characters are a bit blurry. The rest of EXO but not KaiSoo. 

I can't read the quote too. The 'M' in 'May' looks like an 'N'. Was that on purpose? I don't think it is though. And you should put this as your main poster. It looks better than the other one. That's just my opinion though. 

Your background is pretty cute too ~ :D


Description & Foreword: 7.5 over 10

The description is so cute! I love it but I think it will be better if you remove the 'Your average Love Guru. The one that was written in pink? It's pretty much unnecessary. Also you should move the note.

Like this: (Just a suggestion!)

He found a letter in his locker one morning and he thought it was a joke. But was it really? (Select the text at the arrows to read the message.)

You should do it in a smaller font so it won't be that eye-catching. For the rest of the note, maybe you could move it to the lowest part of the foreword. 

I don't like your foreword... sort of. I guess it spoiled some parts of the story for me and in some ways,
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