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Karehana
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Review by: Iamanexofan
Title: 4.5 over 5
Your title is very unique and is very related to the story. I suppose it's eye-catching for some people but I wouldn't have read it if you didn't request xD That's just me though.
Poster & Background: 6.5 over 10
I love your background! It's so pretty! ^^ Especially since it's HQ hahaha but it doesn't give of the angst vibe.
I think that your poster could be better though. It screams drama and romance but not angst and action. I just don't feel it I guess...
If you're planning on changing it, here are some shops that I highly recommend. (Click on the diamonds to be directed to the link.)
♦ IceCream Graphics
♦ Chocolat Poster Shop
♦ Dark Heart Graphics
Description & Foreword: 8.5 over 10
Your description is so pretty but I just don't get it... It's good to keep your readers interested by not providing too much details but in your case, you didn't provide enough information.
Plot: 33 over 35
I was really shocked when I read your story... I thought that she'd side with them or something... you know the typical loyal daughter who wouldn't betray her parents. I was wrong though xD and I would have never pegged Chen, the CHEN, to be an assassin. I now understand how he could have a whole chicken leg xDD
You should have warned about slight and stuf
Your title is very unique and is very related to the story. I suppose it's eye-catching for some people but I wouldn't have read it if you didn't request xD That's just me though.
Poster & Background: 6.5 over 10
I love your background! It's so pretty! ^^ Especially since it's HQ hahaha but it doesn't give of the angst vibe.
I think that your poster could be better though. It screams drama and romance but not angst and action. I just don't feel it I guess...
If you're planning on changing it, here are some shops that I highly recommend. (Click on the diamonds to be directed to the link.)
♦ IceCream Graphics
♦ Chocolat Poster Shop
♦ Dark Heart Graphics
Description & Foreword: 8.5 over 10
Your description is so pretty but I just don't get it... It's good to keep your readers interested by not providing too much details but in your case, you didn't provide enough information.
Plot: 33 over 35
I was really shocked when I read your story... I thought that she'd side with them or something... you know the typical loyal daughter who wouldn't betray her parents. I was wrong though xD and I would have never pegged Chen, the CHEN, to be an assassin. I now understand how he could have a whole chicken leg xDD
You should have warned about slight and stuf
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