Promise

A Mermaid's Tale
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Narrator's pov:

 

Woohyun blinked a few times as he thought back to what Neela told him. Forget his feelings. Get rid of them. That's actually what should happen and he wasn't stupid. From what Neela told him, he knew that it had no meaning to even develop feelings for Marna as she had to return to the sea again. She couldn't stay on the land and she couldn't stay as human.

He liked her, a lot and having to suddenly forget about these feelings, it wasn't the most easy job to do.

But he was willing to try, just to not ruin the friendship he had developed with the young mermaid. And also to help her and not make thigns uncomfortable for her. 

 

Marna looked outside, seeing the waves of the sea moving.

She kept thinking about what Sori told her. That she likes, no, that she loves him and that she saw her as competition.

Her heart felt uneasy with this, squeezing together, but she didn't know what it was and she couldn't find it out either as she had completely no idea at all.

And maybe, just maybe this is a good thing. Like this, she won't find out what love is and like this she can return to the sea without getting hurt.

 

Neela and Key were in the living room, both holding a cup with green tea, the hot steam visible in the air around it.

"I told Woohyun... I hope he'll fulfill my favor." 

Key sighed and looked outside the big glass window, smiling softly as he saw the waves moving lazily.

"I don't want to see someone getting hurt again." Key muttered, but Neela heard this and she hummed in question.

"Jonghyun, he... that guy had a hard time after you suddenly disappeared out of his life." Key said and Neela looked down with sad eyes.

"He asked about you and told me that he even c

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herejusttoread #1
Chapter 21: Sad. Was gonna cry
PhuPwint #2
Chapter 21: Your story is good.I want a happy ending.But it's okay.
RoxanaSting
#3
I almost cried at 'Epilogue Turquoise' so sad and sweet! Poor Key he had to keep so many secrets and protect his grandson. But because of him I was laughing the most. "Who is this girl?" very good idea haha! And I see Neela realy changed into bubbles.
As to Woohyun and Marna they may not confess but the emptiness in their heart stayed and maybe even grew a little - especially for Woohyun since he was aware of his feelings. But I suppose Sori and Woohyun get married and their child is Minho? (or their child, child?)
I kind of miss Jonghyun in this story but I'm happy he came back to the sea :)
And lastly... In your mermaids stories... Is it possible for human to change into mermaid? (well you asked it first in this story :P)
artangel04
#4
Chapter 21: I just finished reading your story. Uwahhh. I cried at that part when Neela gave away her life... I must read the first one. But heck if I cried in this one and didn't even read the first one to know their exact story, I will probably sob. Real hard xD
artangel04
#5
Chapter 21: I just finished reading your story. Uwahhh. I cried at that part when Neela gave away her life... I must read the first one. But heck if I cried in this one and didn't even read the first one to know their exact story, I will probably sob. Real hard xD
hotseven
#6
Chapter 21: Do you have another sequel? Hahaha this is as beautiful as the prequel
honestlydeadd
#7
Chapter 21: Haha! Small enterance of Minho!! I love this, even though there isn't a couple I still do!!!
galladite
#8
Chapter 21: So the book that belonged to Key was given/passed down to Minho? And Jonghyun and Neela's story was told to Minho? Its what I think. :) Thank you for the story!
Tomboy84 #9
Chapter 21: This story was really good but I wished it ended in romance not friends.