It tickles

A Mermaid's Tale
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Marna's pov:

 

I wonder what happend to the storyteller...

Did she really die?

Turn nito bubbles and disappeared?

It can't be right?

I turned my head to the door when someone knocked on it. Woohyun opened the door and gave me one of his many smiles.

"Did you shower already?" he asked.

I nodded my head and shifted a bit aside so he could sit next to me on the soft bed.

It's been days since Cora told me the storyteller disappeared and slowly my time was getting up.

The thing was... I was getting used to living here on the land. I liked it how many interesting thigns there were.

But there was one thing I discvoered I never knew what it was.

A really weird feeling in my body.

It felt ticklish, a bit like how electricity went through my body.

I thought I was sick, but mermaids don't get sick, so... I didn't even know what it was.

It grew worse when Woohyun was near me.

Just what is this feeling...?

 

"Sori and I are going to the center of the city to buy some things. You're coming with us, right?"

Tomorrow?

"Grandpa asked me to help him..." I muttered.

"It's fine, I told grandpa, he said it was okay for you to come with us. You can't stay ehre, you have to see a lot, when you have the chance."

I noticed Woohyun's voice was weird and wondered why.

Is he sick?

 

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herejusttoread #1
Chapter 21: Sad. Was gonna cry
PhuPwint #2
Chapter 21: Your story is good.I want a happy ending.But it's okay.
RoxanaSting
#3
I almost cried at 'Epilogue Turquoise' so sad and sweet! Poor Key he had to keep so many secrets and protect his grandson. But because of him I was laughing the most. "Who is this girl?" very good idea haha! And I see Neela realy changed into bubbles.
As to Woohyun and Marna they may not confess but the emptiness in their heart stayed and maybe even grew a little - especially for Woohyun since he was aware of his feelings. But I suppose Sori and Woohyun get married and their child is Minho? (or their child, child?)
I kind of miss Jonghyun in this story but I'm happy he came back to the sea :)
And lastly... In your mermaids stories... Is it possible for human to change into mermaid? (well you asked it first in this story :P)
artangel04
#4
Chapter 21: I just finished reading your story. Uwahhh. I cried at that part when Neela gave away her life... I must read the first one. But heck if I cried in this one and didn't even read the first one to know their exact story, I will probably sob. Real hard xD
artangel04
#5
Chapter 21: I just finished reading your story. Uwahhh. I cried at that part when Neela gave away her life... I must read the first one. But heck if I cried in this one and didn't even read the first one to know their exact story, I will probably sob. Real hard xD
hotseven
#6
Chapter 21: Do you have another sequel? Hahaha this is as beautiful as the prequel
honestlydeadd
#7
Chapter 21: Haha! Small enterance of Minho!! I love this, even though there isn't a couple I still do!!!
galladite
#8
Chapter 21: So the book that belonged to Key was given/passed down to Minho? And Jonghyun and Neela's story was told to Minho? Its what I think. :) Thank you for the story!
Tomboy84 #9
Chapter 21: This story was really good but I wished it ended in romance not friends.