☆ Monster  in the corner ☆
by: chensing

//TITLE: (4/5)

I guess I could say this is unique but it didn't quite catch my attention that much.

//DESCRIPTION & FOREWORD: (4/5)

It was quite intriguing for me since it had that mysterious vibe.

//WRITING STYLE & APPEARANCE: (4/5)

The overall appearance is real neat and the poster's just lovely. I do have to comment about the picture in the middle of Chapter 2. Readers would really like to imagine the events, so I think you can remove the picture. But taking that aside, it was well written.

//PLOT: (20/20)

(The time you submitted your request, you had one chapter, but rn you have 2 chapters here, so I just read both) There are a lot of events in here that raises up people's curiousity (let's state "Why Kris cried", "What was that monster doing there" or "What does the principal mean by he's changed over the years"). I personally like that.

//ORIGINALITY: (19/20)

I haven't heard of this White Christmas drama yet, so let's assume you wrote this without a background of that drama. The school setting was kind of usual, but then Kris had a gun... in school. The role of the "monster "in here so far was quite original I suppose..

//FLOW: (14/15)

I think it's a little bit fast-paced but I could still follow the story.

//CHARACTERS: (14/15)

I find Kris' character here really mysterious and the way you describe his actions were giving that much of an impact, in my opinion.

//GRAMMAR & SPELLING: (15/15)

There were none. n_n

//OTHER REMARKS:

This White Christmas sounds so interesting, tho...

//t o t a l: (94/100)
hooray! you made it to my recommendations :3
i'ms sorry for posting this up late tho T_T