☆ Abhor ☆
by: jjang017

//TITLE: (5/5)

It’s really unique for me! No one else had this title yet. It’s also one of those really uncommon English words that I find fancy (in my opinion n_n;;)

//DESCRIPTION & FOREWORD: (5/5)

The way you put it is really beautiful. It’s really something that readers would get attracted to.

//WRITING STYLE & APPEARANCE: (4/5)

The pictures and gifs fit with the theme of your story perfectly, it’s just that the poster’s green(is it? Or  cyan?) overlay is quite too much that somehow ruins a bit of the mood. But then, this is beautifully written.

//PLOT: (18/20)

I could say that she is pessimistic, but I can’t really see how much pessimistic she could be at the current chapters. These chapters as of now are more of an introduction, as what I would put them into. But it is something worth looking forward to. Hello bb you gained a subbie n_n

//ORIGINALITY: (20/20)

This is the first time I came across a pessimistic-centric fic, to be honest! Almost all the others have this optimistic or bubbly feeling but this has a lot of dislike, loathe, and yes, abhor.

//FLOW: (14/15)

I could go along with it just well.

//CHARACTERS: (15/15)

Man I got the chills with Sojung. You described their actions and feelings perfectly.

//GRAMMAR & SPELLING: (14/15)

I want to correct these.

“She kept her words hidden, she hated talking even, she writes her words and thoughts and hides them…”

                I think a better way to put this is “She kept her words hidden; she hated talking even. She writes her…”.

“Sojung talked and talked, as if she was a free lady.”

                “… as if she were a free lady.”. Back at our review, I was told that in a sentence like this, “were” is the  one to use.

I think I found a few more, too, but those are unnoticeable, thus can be ignored.

//OTHER REMARKS:

I’m not into Ladies’ Code, but I do agree she’s really pretty lol ;u; another fic I enjoyed doing a review of! \ ^o^ /

//t o t a l: (95/100)
;o; omg highest score so far. you've made it to my recommendations!! <3