✽ { Green-eyed Monster } by taekeybb
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☆ Green-eyed Monster ☆
by: taekeybb
//TITLE: (5/5)
It’s unique all right (surprised that not many fics have this title). It does fit your story. However… I looked up at the meaning of Phantasm and that actually suits your story, too. ;A; But Green-eyed monster is good, tho.
//DESCRIPTION & FOREWORD: (4/5)
It’s simple and it doesn’t give too much about your story.
//WRITING STYLE & APPEARANCE: (5/5)
It’s so… green, but I like how you put that green in. The writing style is okay, too. I like how you put a dictionary below, since not many people have that much knowledge in the Korean language.
//PLOT: (20/20)
It's really....... o m f g. I really took every. single. detail. in this fic. ;o; It has a lot of twists and conflicts (especially the ending), which I actually like!
//ORIGINALITY: (20/20)
I definitely haven’t read any fic with this plot yet!
//FLOW: (15/15)
I had no problems with it.
//CHARACTERS: (15/15)
I’m really impressed at the way you described their POVs and they were detailed.
//GRAMMAR & SPELLING: (14/15)
Just a few (unnoticeable) mistakes there but you’re really good!! I had doubts that your main language isn’t English.
//OTHER REMARKS:
POOR JONGIN POOR JONGIN POOR JNGINRT PORHTUFD KAJONGAINF SOBBING i really enjoyed your fic ;u;
//t o t a l: (98/100)
omg you really deserve to be in my recommendations ;o; excellent job!!
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