☆ Letters To A Sasaeng ☆
by: Lovex2254

//TITLE: (4/5)

I’ve seen a lot of fics that start off with “Letters to…”, but since it’s addressed to a sasaeng (and the issue about sasaeng “fans” is really big right now), it’s something that draws the attention of the people.

//DESCRIPTION & FOREWORD: (4/5)

It’s frank, but yet again, it’s something worth catching the attention of the fans (sasaeng or not). “You hurt them; you scare them; you break them down.”. Fans might ask “to what extent are they scared of us? Should I assess myself if I’m showing signs of a sasaeng?”

//WRITING STYLE & APPEARANCE: (4/5)

Your poster isn’t that much clear. Your writing style is fine for me, though.

//PLOT: (19/20)

So far, it’s more of a prologue more than the actual story itself, but still, readers are looking forward to what you’ll do here  (including me, hehe.)

//ORIGINALITY: (20/20)

I think this is actually the first fic about sasaeng fans? Praises you for bringing up this topic.

//FLOW: (14/15)

Not too fast, really. I could go along with it just fine.

//CHARACTERS: (14/15)

So it’s in the POV of the idol. You’ve really expressed it in the most probable way an idol would feel about them (of course who wouldn’t get mad at people constantly disturbing them for a lot of days already. I doubt that anyone has tolerance that long).

//GRAMMAR & SPELLING: (15/15)

“Greatful” is actually spelt as “grateful”. I’ll let that pass, though. Everything else is okay.

//OTHER REMARKS:

About my views on the sasaeng issue, I’ve fed up just ranting about them when in reality I found out there’s nothing I could really do to stop them. It seems really impossible to stand up and just tell it in front of their faces, tbh. It’s to the extent I find them too stubborn to listen to warnings to stop this act. The best thing I could do is to never follow their acts. After all, one day, the sasaeng “fans” will have to taste their own medicine (isn’t that right, Tao?). It’s sad to know that they basically have access to everything we wanted, yet those accessible things seem to go in the wrong hands. So basically, every sasaeng should read this.

//t o t a l: (94/100)
you deserve to be in my recommendations ;3