☆ Library Love ☆
by: inspiritfriend

//TITLE: (4/5)

Your title completely fits the concept of your fic, and the title hadn’t been used much as of now (there are about 5 of you with fics of the same title). However I feel like there isn’t much of an impact?

//DESCRIPTION & FOREWORD: (3/5)

At first, I thought “Oh hey a cliché plot,” but since your setting is a library, I let it pass (because I rarely find fics about libraries).  Also, it didn’t draw much of attention, although it does say what would really happen in your fic.

“Something made me write this.” – teehee may I know what :3

//WRITING STYLE & APPEARANCE: (3/5)

The background you have on is fine with me. However, about your poster, since the main setting is in a library, I suggest that you add a library feel in there (and idk how the cards got in there). Your poster’s really cute though! Also… you have very short chapters. ;o;

//PLOT: (17/20)

I’m sorry but this doesn’t have much of an impact on me. However, I do find it cute!

//ORIGINALITY: (20/20)

To be honest this is the first time I’ve come across a “one-sided love” in a library. Heck, I rarely find fics with library settings.

//FLOW: (13/15)

The sequence of events are perfectly fine for me, however, I do think they happen at a rush. Take it easy.

//CHARACTERS: (12/15)

It is in the POV of the girl, but her feelings aren’t that much detailed or shown. I suggest that you should make her express more. I also feel like you should lessen what Sungjong feels about the girl stalking him, since it’s still in the POV of the girl (as  what I interpreted though *gulps*).

//GRAMMAR & SPELLING: (13/15)

There is no space in bookworm. Now about your grammar…

☀ “Although you love reading mysterious stories, you’re definitely not a book worm. Or maybe considered as a book worm.”

It took me a couple of rereads to understand what that “or maybe considered as a book worm” meant. I believe that last sentence is unnecessary.

☀ “There’re only two ending for your story now.”

I believe you mean “endings”.

☀ “You sighed; keep back the story…”

“You sighed and kept the story back…”

☀ “Yes, you’ve guess right.”

“Yes, you’ve guessed it right.”

However, I do take in consideration that your main language is not English. n_n

//OTHER REMARKS:

Yay thanks for letting me read an Infinite fic!! :D

//t o t a l:  (85/100)
*pats your back* you did well. :3 thanks for requesting!!