☆ Sixth Sense ☆
by: kpopandvarietylover

//TITLE: (3/5)

I’d figured this would be a title that is uncommon already. There are a couple of fics with this title. I’ve said before that K-Pop song titles are really prone to be fic titles (in this case, Brown Eyed Girls’ Sixth Sense) but if the author didn’t know that such artist has such song, it’s understandable. But based from your plot, it does sound like what happened in the MV of Sixth Sense. It is still eye-catchy though.

//DESCRIPTION & FOREWORD: (4/5)

You have quite an eye-catching foreword. It gives off that mysterious vibe.

//WRITING STYLE & APPEARANCE: (4/5)

It’s plain but it's ok with me.

//PLOT: (18/20)

It's really interesting!! Although it's about their flashbacks at the moment and idk what's going to happen in their present. You presented that well though. (you gained a subscriber, dear n_n)

//ORIGINALITY: (20/20)

I really thought this is original!! I’ve never seen any fic like this yet.

//FLOW: (14/15)

I could go along with it pretty well though.

//CHARACTERS: (13/15)

The characters had different backgrounds and I like that since that’s what make them unique from each other.

//GRAMMAR & SPELLING: (13/15)

There were minimal spelling errors. I only have this to point out:

“WHAT ‘CHU LOOKING AT?” I’m sorry but it kinda ruins the intensity (“chu” has a different meaning for me). You could’ve gone with “What’re you looking at?”

//OTHER REMARKS:

Update soon? lol ;u; I'm looking forward to much more of your fic n_n

//t o t a l: (89/100)
... ;ooo; so close!! thanks for requesting!!