✽ { Unspoken Whispers } by daredevil_

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☆ Unspoken Whispers ☆
by: daredevil_

 

//TITLE: (5/5)

I like how it is contrasting. I do say this is something nice and unique.

 

//DESCRIPTION & FOREWORD: (5/5)

I find it very intriguing.

 

//WRITING STYLE & APPEARANCE: (4/5)

There’s something about your poster though that makes me want to take down one point (I think it’s dark). But I love your writing style, though!

 

//PLOT: (20/20)

I. Love. It. sobs I love angst. (hey hey could you do a sequel tho bc o m g your epilogue ;A;)

 

//ORIGINALITY: (20/20)

I haven’t seen anything like this so far (especially with Kyungsoo being mute), so I think it’s original.

 

//FLOW: (14/15)

It’s not that fast though.

 

//CHARACTERS: (15/15)

I like how you drift from one POV to another; Kyungsoo’s POV in the first chapter, then Kai’s POV in the next chapter. It helps to get into each of them more.

 

//GRAMMAR & SPELLING: (15/15)

None at all n_nd

 

//OTHER REMARKS:

I just notice that almost all of the fics I actually love have diseases? Is it just me? or… omg

 

//t o t a l: (98/100)
I’m sorry for the late review. But the entrance exam is over :3
anw omg another one to add to my recommendations! Good job n_n

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BR_exo #1
Wow your 20 years old this year, time flies. I hope you comeback. Seems like you left after Kris news :(
Nictaeny9 #2
Chapter 27: Erm what about my review?
chensing #3
Chapter 26: thanks for the review! ill fix those things ^_^
LISHlian #4
Chapter 25: Hi! Thanks so much for the review! I will try to improve on all the things which you've mentioned, and work on the things which I'm lacking of. Thanks for your honest review! ^0^
Nictaeny9 #5
username: Nictaeny9

title: Dark Ties

link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/543164/dark-ties-dark-romance-snsd-taeny-taeyeon-tiffany-yuri

no. of chapters: 9 (on going)

theme: Dark, Drama, Romance

main characters: Tiffany and Taeyeon

is english your first language? : yes

password: 900326
chensing #6
username: chensing
title: monster in the corner
link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/562201/monster-in-the-corner-exo
no. of chapters: 1 (on going)
theme: angst, mystery.
main characters: kris x oc
is english your first language? yeah.
password: 900326

there's only one chapter so far :/ I hope it's still reviewable though? :)
LISHlian #7
username: LISHlian
title: ☬Nemesis of the Sky Descendants☬
link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/388020/nemesis-of-the-sky-descendants-fantasy-krystal-romance-supernatural-exo-kai-kaistal
no. of chapters: Currently 3 (including prologue)
theme: romance, fantasy, angst, supernatural, drama.
main characters: Krystal, kai, exo.
is english your first language? Yes
password: 300326

Thanks. The story is nowhere near complete. It barely even started! But still, I figured that I needed a review to see how I was going so far. THANKS AGAIN! \^0^/
writerinprogress94 #8
username: writerinprogress94
title: "I S I S"
link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/306119
no. of chapters: 10 (well, 12 if you count the 2 most recent, but they're just author's notes, so you can ignore ch 11 & ch 12)
theme: supernatural/sci-fi/fantasy
main characters: "You" as Choi Eun-Su; BoA; TVXQ; SHINee; EXO; Infinite; Big Bang; 2NE1; many other kpop idols will end up with larger parts later in the story (I'm planning this out as a trilogy ^^)
is english your first language?: Yes ^^
password: 900326

I haven't completed it yet (not on here, anyway), because I've been thinking that it might need re-writing, which is why I'm hoping for an unbiased, in depth review ^^
pinkblink #9
Chapter 23: Thanks for reviewing and subbing! :3 Will credit you in my foreword soon :)
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