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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 1, Prompt 5

First Impression: 8/10
Typography: 6/10
Textures, stock: 7/10
Colors: 13/15
Pictures: 13/15
Technique: 15/20
Mood/Theme: 15/20
Bonus: 5/5

Total: 82/100

Comments: It’s certainly nice to look at; I really enjoy the colors you used. Not sure if I like the pictures on the side, I don’t think they are needed but it’s gives off a nice look. You blended the photos together very well along with the background. I wish the color of the font were different, it kinda washes in with the background colors, taking away from the impact.  The quote seems like it was just slapped in the corner, I would have liked to see it towards the bottom center.

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First impression [6/10]
Typography [8/10] Love the typography though I'm not sure if the quote is placed in the right spot
Textures, stocks, etc [6/10] The BG is not bad, but it looks a bit LQ and some of the textures look stretched
Colors [11/15] Great choice of colors, but I think Taemin's photos are a bit too bright
Pictures [14/15]Good quality and well placed photos
Technique [10/20] Taemin's photos are not well blended with the BG at all, you should work on that a bit more; also I think you should have added a kind of prop ot smth to suggest the idea of 'applause' a bit more
Mood/Theme [10/20] I'm kinda confused of what the theme is supposed to be, Taemin is happy in two of the photos and not so much in the third one, the BG is in dark colors yet the character is bright...
Bonus [5/5]

Total [70/100]

 

 

Type 4, Prompt 3

First Impression: 8/10
Typography: 5/10
Textures, stock: 8/10
Colors: 12/15
Pictures: 14/15
Technique: 15/20
Mood/Theme: 15/20

Total: 77/100

Comments: It’s blended nicely. You used two gif’s so I’ll give you props but it makes the poster seem a little too busy but satisfying. I see the theme you were going for so you get points for that. The font isn’t very eye catching, it’s just red and embossed which I don’t mind, I would just rather not have it there if its not going to be the main focus.

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First impression [8/10]
Typography [6/10] The typography and placement is good, but I'm not fond of the color; it is TVXQ fandom color but it doesn't fit much here
Textures, stocks, etc [8/10] I'm not sure if it would've been okay to use some props to add to the feeling
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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3