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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 4, Prompt 6

First Impression: 7/10
Typography: 7/10
Textures, stock: 8/10
Colors: 10/15
Pictures: 6/15
Technique: 10/20
Mood/Theme: 14/20

Total: 62/100

Comments: I like the feel of this, the mystery and slight angst always brings a nice feel to a poster but I have a little problem with the cutting of the photos. It looks a little sloppy especially towards Kyungsoo’s neck but you blended them well with the background so it’s not too big of a problem. The quote is nice and I like the font but I see there is no title so I’m confused on the direction I guess? I just think adding a title in the middle would have been a nice touch.

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First impression [7/10]
Typography [7/10] I like the text here, though the shadow/outer glow/motion blur (not sure what it is) of the "O" is a little cut off, also you could have played a bit more with it typography it's a bit too simple contrary to the whole graphic
Textures, stocks, etc [8/10] Very good choice of props and their placement/blending is nicely done
Colors [14/15] B&W/greyish colors do fit well with the song, you could have still added some faint color to it
Pictures [10/15] Kyungsoo's picture is well chosen, but Jongin's is different and doesn't ma

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3