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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 1, Prompt 1

First Impression: 7/10
Typography: 6/10
Textures, stock: 7/10
Colors: 11/15
Pictures: 7/15
Technique: 10/20
Mood/Theme: 10/20

Total: 58/100

Comments: I like this at first glance but there are a lot of things in this that could use a little work. The main picture for starts could have been better, I like the male’s expression but the headphones throw off the feel in a real bad way. The title needs to be bigger and in a color that doesn’t clash with the main colors. I like the background however, it’s suiting to the mood.

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First impression [9/10]
Typography [5/10] I really don't think the font is fitting and the placement is somewhat random
Textures, stocks, etc [7/10] Well blended textures/stocks, but I don't understand how some of them fit the idea, especially the creepy girl in the back o.o
Colors [10/15] The colors are great, well chosen and fit with one another, but they don't really match the mystery theme
Pictures [9/15] The quality looks a little distorted and his hair is cut off weirdly, but the placement is nice
Technique [18/20] Good job with blending everything together, but you should have erased those lines getting in his face
Mood/Theme [10/20] I don't see h

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3