PreciousMuffin

'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 1, Prompt 1

First Impression: 7/10
Typography: 8/10
Textures, stock: 5/10
Colors: 10/15
Pictures: 9/15
Technique: 10/20
Mood/Theme: 13/20
Bonus: 5/5

Total: 67/105

Comments: A little simple, maybe too simple. Not enough is going on to keep my eye interested, the main photo doesn’t seem very mood appropriate but I like the black bar around her eyes, it brings a nice feel to the main photo. The font style is fitting and the placement is fine I just wish a little more was going on.

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First impression [6/10]
Typography [10/10] Love the typography, clean, matching, gorgeous
Textures, stocks, etc [3/10] Honestly there's not much going on here, you could have added a lot more props to display the theme and the idea
Colors [13/15] B&W though I've always felt a bit of pale color could add to the mystery theme
Pictures [9/15] The quality and placement is okay, though I don't see how the casually dressed girl fits the given theme
Technique [9/20] There's not much to see here, since you placed the character in the middle it means you should have orientated everything around her, but there's nothing here to show the mystery theme, except maybe the strip across her eyes which is a bit of a cliche, or grab the attention; simple is good but not too simple
Mood/Theme [8/20] Well it is a mysterious graphic, so much that no one can even guess what's happening... total lack of theme portraying
Bonus [5/5]

Total [63/100]

 

 

 

Type 2, Prompt 6

First Impression: 7/10
Typography: 7/10
Textures, stock: 6/10
Colors: 11/15
Pictures: 9/15
Technique: 9/20
Mood/Theme: 9/20

Total: 58/100

Comments: Doesn’t seem very interesting at first, I think you should have included more characters, right now, the title and the main photo don’t really make much sense plus the quote also leaves me thinking, where is the ‘she’ this quote speaks

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3