EJJoey90
'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]Type 1, Prompt 2
First Impression: 7/10
Typography: 6/10
Textures, stock: 8/10
Colors: 7/15
Pictures: 10/15
Technique: 9/20
Mood/Theme: 15/20
Bonus: 5/5
Total: 67/100
Comments: There are a lot of simple elements used in this entry. I don’t see much proof of blending but your cutting is very clean and smooth. The font placement is a little off. I see the word ‘fruits’ behind Jessica’s head, which is awkward because I can’t see the whole word but I do like how you made it seem as if Luhan was eating it, that was a creative touch. Plus you used the bonus picture and made it appear as if Jessica were holding it, I like that. I would have liked it better if you made that the main focus title instead of the little part at the bottom, which don’ t get me wrong, I like, I just don’t find it very necessary.
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First impression [7/10]
Typography [7/10] I absolutely love the title's typography and the whole way it's made, however those flying quotes above are really weird to me
Textures, stocks, etc [8/10] The BG seems a bit too plain, but overall all the props used are nice
Colors [9/15] Jessica is really colorful, Luhan - not so much and then there's the black quotes and the plain BG, to me they all don't really match with eachother and the seemingly happy theme
Pictures [13/15] Very good quality and placement, but Jessica is a bit too transparent and that text is going through her head
Technique [11/20] It's not a really amazing technique or something unseen, but you did put some creativity in it and I like that you tried to make something unusual; you could work on not trying to fill space up with weird quotes
Mood/Theme [10/20] Like I mentioned in the 'Colors' segment I don't think all the elements of the graphic match the happy/comedy theme
Bonus [5/5]
Total [70/100]
Type 1, Prompt 3
First Impression: 9/10
Typography: 9/10
Textures, stock: 10/10
Colors: 14/15
Pictures: 13/15
Technique: 15/20
Mood/Theme: 15/20
Bonus: 5/5
Total: 90/100
Comments: This is very beautiful. I love the color scheme, soft, light, gentle colors. Also, the stock photos you used were very fitting; everything ties in the quote nicely. The font placement is fine, perhaps resizing it would make it a little more noticeable. I love your quote but I wish it didn’t have the shadow effect; it stands out in a distracting way and takes away form the title.
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First impression [8/10]
Typography [7/10]I think the title should've been a little bigger given the fact that it's above a huge pile of roses, also the typography of the quote and the quote itself seemd unusual for me
Textures, stocks, etc [8/10] I really like the textures used, overall they fit well with eachother, but the quality in places is a bit distorted and I think it's because you saved it in .jpg, try .png - it doesn't mess with the quality
Colors [11/15] I'm not really fond of the fact that the graphic is light on the left and darker on the right
Pictures [13/15] The quality and placement are great, though the effect used on the picture makes it look somewhat weird
Technique [14/20] The blending around Jessica is a bit awkward especially at the bottom and I feel like the different parts of the graphic have different effects used on them, which makes the graphic look a bit weird overall
Mood/Theme [20/20] No remarks here
Bonus [5/5]
Total [86/100]
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