WhiteViolet

'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 1, Prompt 9

First Impression: 7/10
Typography: 7/10
Textures, stock: 7/10
Colors: 10/15
Pictures: 9/15
Technique: 10/20
Mood/Theme: 10/20
Bonus: 5/5

Total: 65/100

Comments: The top half is beautiful. The female photo looks awkwardly placed but its fitting plus she blends in with L’s jacket, which I like a lot. The scratch textures along the border and scuffs on the poster give it that vintage look, very nice job. The bottom half, however, needs work. The blue of the flowers is a nice color but I think it stands out a little too much. Perhaps if you turned down the saturation a bit, it wouldn’t be so vibrant and would blend more fitting in with the two main images. I like the title font and color but the quote style doesn’t match very well, also the white makes it standout in the wrong way, throwing off the vibe of the poster. I like it all in all.

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First impression [7/10]
Typography [5/10] The title's font is okay, but the color is a bit off; the quote however is with a nice color, but a messed up font; also the credit is a bit unreadable and there's a mistake in the quote
Textures, stocks, etc [8/10] Apart from the blue roses I can see some vintage textures were used and a mask/frame around the corners; all the props are fairly nice, though the roses are a bit badly blended
Colors [11/15] I like the b&w combined with one other color type of graphics a lot, however the title's color ruins the whole thing; also the top part is a bit too bright
Pictures [8/15] I'm not sure if it's from the vintage textures, but the quality looks really distorted; also I'm not really fond of the girl's placement, she could have been a bit bigger and maybe looking to the other side would have been n

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3