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'Bunnylicious' Graphic contest [complete]
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Type 1, Prompt 2

First Impression: 8/10
Typography: 8/10
Textures, stock: 7/10
Colors: 13/15
Pictures: 12/15
Technique: 10/20
Mood/Theme: 10/20
Bonus: 5/5

Total: 73/105

Comments: This poster has a nice feel to it, I would definitely be curious about the story plot. The title at the bottom isn’t very eye catching, I would have placed it else where. Perhaps if you resized the main photos and placed them off towards the left, you could have had the font going diagonally to the right. That would have been a nice touch. The clip art verse real photo of the fruits clash in an unattractive way. I also am not very fond of the grain/rough texture filter you used. Maybe if you just let it set in the background and not the main photos, it would have been fine. Nice job though, I do like how everything ties together.

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First impression [8/10]
Typography [7/10] The typography is well done, nicely chosen font and colors, but the title is a bit too small and unnoticeable.
Textures, stocks, etc [6/10] The props you used aren't bad though they're only placed in one side of the graphic and also it's weird when a RL and a drawed photo are put together.
Colors [13/15] The colors are overall nice.
Pictures [10/15] The cutting could use a bit more work an

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ilabya6 #1
interesting
ChemicalLuvs #2
Chapter 40: oh sorry. I didn't notice you already posted the winners. I'm sorry.
Congrats to all winner. The poster are so pretty *.*
And thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and improve more :))
nadiel_4all
#3
Chapter 41: Congratulation to the winner!!!! =D oh ya, and thanks for the comment. I'll work hard in the future.. chukahae again to everyone!!!!!!
presence-of-light #4
still waiting for the winner!
KimHeeRa
#5
Chapter 51: Can't wait for results...woo...
Nara_Huang
#6
Chapter 51: all poster are very very amazing, i know i'm not gonna win for this contest >.<
7Seconds
#7
Chapter 51: Woo. Can't wait for results.
ButterflyShida #8
Chapter 2: submitted at last!
ButterflyShida #9
Chapter 3: can i have extended time?? if can't it's okay..
suicidal-smiles
#10
Chapter 2: Submitted :3